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By : hColleen
  • From ANON - vampslyr on February 01, 2006
    I can see the tea being a kind of challenge; Hiei's last attempt to try to see Kurama as a monster before giving in. Yet Kurama met the challenge by showing that even if he couldn't drink the tea, he was still human (or non-monster) enough to enjoy its other properties. This is quite good and my roommate says that the Anita Blake books get a bit less gory and much more sexy as they go on, so I'm very tempted now to find the next one at the library. I love the sexual high vampires get from sharing blood, so I can't *wait* for the bonding ceremony. I'll love whatever you give us, but I'd kinda like to see the ceremony not be a lemon in the clothes-off sense, just in the intense emotional bonding that leaves you panting for more sense, then have Yusuke send him home to sleep it off. Leaves a confused angsty Hiei who's still trying to sort out his feelings and gives Yusuke the moral high road that he didn't force anything Hiei wasn't ready for. Let Yusuke wait until Hiei's panting and more than willing before they take him. [Grin] that's my two cents worth. Thanks for updating so soon and I hope you feel better.

    Man I'm glad I write these out in Word to spell check them, else I'd loose them with these annoying server problems.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 01, 2006
    What's funny is that Hiei doesn't realize that Kurama owns Yusuke as much as Yusuke owns Kurama. Kurama's ownership is much more subtle, for - really - what would Yusuke do without Kurama?

    All that aside, the lemon scene was dripping hot. Nothing like a little vampyric blood-play to push that lemon into high gear! But, really - Kurama wrapping his legs around Yusuke's waist and being carried down the stairs, and then the desk, and then Yusuke letting Kurama drink from him..........

    Now I'm sweating.

    And I loved Hiei's backstory, I've never read the Anita Blake books and I don't know anything about the character he's based from, so it's a nice surprise to hear about his past. I know you metioned the white streak in an earlier chapter, but I give you mad props for that (it's is AU and if he has the same hair, it does need to be explained). The whole thing about him raising his parents reminds me of Full Metal Alchemist, especially since it had the same miserable results. You really can't fuck around with death, it'll hurt you if you try to cheat it.

    And I used to drink Assam Breakfast tea (it was loose tea, and I had a lovely little spoon strainer), but that company stopped making it. It was very soothing.

    I have to say that this is one of your best stories (although I'm a biased goth girl since it's vampyres). I'm a sucker for multi-chaptered fics, and I've never seen anyone else do this before. The pacing on this is excellent and I can't get enough. You please me so.
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on February 01, 2006
    Wow! You are seriously doing a WONDERFUL job with this! I love it so much!! I can't wait to read more! No wonder Hiei has a thing against vamps if they killed his parents. That's so sad!!

    Well, I'm getting booted off the computer, so I have to go for now. I'm waiting with baited breath for your next update!!
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  • From ANON - nytekit on January 31, 2006
    Nice yet again. Hiei can't seem to escape his desires, can he? He's really not going to now that he's agreed to join them. He's trapped, and you did a great job of making sure he knew that. I love the inner turmoil he was feeling. Now what I also loved was that sweet lemon between our two vamps. That was nice yet not overly done. It was cute how you also had them showing their love for each other. And Yususke's demands are requests, huh? I can see how that works. Nice job with Kurama's subservant character in here. Normally, I would detest something like that but you're doling a great job at it yet not making him seem weak or anything. Great job! Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - citizen cobalt on January 31, 2006
    I love this fic! I've never read Anita Blake stuff, but I'm in the process of finding some of it. I found a really good fic a while ago, and now I must read the series so that I can better understand the story line. Keep writing! ^_^
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  • From kogaluver on January 31, 2006
    Ohhhhh man. There is nothing that drenches my panties more than hot breath fanning over my face and especially my neck. Yusuke and Kurama are so sensual with each other. I swear you do can do porn without the partners even actually touching each other. And then the icing on the cake is Yusuke pounding Kurama's sweet little ass. I love the way Kurama stole that kiss from Hiei, too cute and was again sensual. Our poor, confused Hiei. He wants them so badly, but doesn't want to become a monster like them. I have to say that if I had to become a monster to get some Yusuke and Kurama lovin, then let the transformation begin BABY! I can't wait to see how Yusuke marks Hiei. You've written Yusuke so fucking sexy in this fic that I feel you wrote it for me, lol. Damn, just too much goodness and yumminess and hotness. Keep it coming, my lowly one. Your Mistress has spoken.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 31, 2006
    nice
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  • From ANON - lunar_eclipse24 on January 31, 2006
    So Bui is one of the ones challenging Yusuke. I had been wondering about that and about who Hiei's girlfriend was.
    Would I be right in guessing that Karasu and the Toguro brothers are the other three?

    I think I need to read the Anita Blake books. A friend did tell me that they were basically vampire S&M porn...


    I hope you feel better. ^_^
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 30, 2006
    POUT. But I want the desk scene now.... (stomps feet like 5 year old).

    Damn, that was friggin GOOD. Your regular conversations are exquisite and they still reek of sexuality without even trying. Yusuke really makes me drool in this one though, he has an answer for everything "You’re a necromancer, a vampire slayer. You raise the dead and kill them again. You kill us. Why is it you are not a monster and we are?” Um..yeah..how does Hiei answer that?

    And Hiei getting in the car and telling Kurama that he hates him and Kurama saying "Not as much as you'd like to". I loved that too.

    I say MARK HIM, MARK HIM DAMMIT! (Gets in line to mark Hiei). I like that he doesn't get tired out like the other in his field do, he has amazing power. I know, I know, haphazard review...
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  • From ANON - nytekit on January 30, 2006
    Well this fic definitely seems interesting. I'm extremely intrigued by this storyline. And you've got me wondering where the relationship of the three will lead to. I'm sure it won't be "strictly business" for long. You're doing a very nice job so far, as usual. And you've even got me wanting to read this series. I might need to go check it out... Update soon!
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  • From ANON - tinkle time kelly on January 29, 2006
    This is good so far.I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on January 29, 2006
    Damn. I've had the hardest time trying to get AFF to work for me. I couldn't get to any stories, just kept getting "can't find server" I hate that shit.

    Kurama is so cute in this fic, I just wanna hug and cuddle him. Hiei's showing a lot of patience with Kurama following him around, but then, who wouldn't want Kurama following them around, lol. The plot is sure thickening. I wonder who is challenging Yusuke? Maybe Sensui or Togoro. Ohhhh maybe Karasu. He's such vampire wannabe anyway. Hiei needs to chill out and let Yusuke mark him, lol. Mmmmmmm, I want Yusuke to mark me. Too yummy and hot. I loved the teaser in your live journal. This fic has me all excited and wanting. I just love it!
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on January 29, 2006
    O. Poor Hiei. Such conflict for him. Must be frustrating. Being considered a monster by those he slays. Well, I can not wait for more. You're doing a wonderful job with this story!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 28, 2006
    wow i may need to start reading these ab books since your idea came from it and see how it is.
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  • From ANON - Lonely lust on January 28, 2006
    OMG! I love you! Well, love the story. Love you for writing it. I adore the Anita Blake books! And vampire stories in general so I am really looking forward to reading more of this!!
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