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By : KuwaLover

From ANON - inuyashalove04 on May 15, 2006
You- Cool ^^ I’m glad my story is relaxing for you ^^. I’m glad you find it interesting ^^. Ok, if you say so ^^ hahaha, still think if people look a bit deeper for some parts and not put TOO much thought in others they will figure it out ^^;; and I’m glad you are betaing for me, and I will get some of the new chapters to you soon…I hope…I should just send you what I got so far, though I’m going to be re-writing the ENTIRE ending of the DT…ooops…wait…I mean how Yusuke fights and stuff, I’m going to do it the way I want ^^;;; wait…just forget it, you’ll just see ^^;; hahaha. Yeah a one shot ^^. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I don’t know when it is or was but all the same ^^. Awwwww I’m sorry to hear that! (hugs) but you just never know ^^, this year you might have a great time ^^. But I really need to know WHO because I don’t know who you love the most as a couple! And it drives me nuts ^^;;; so please tell me soon…and if your b-day past then I will make you TWO one for the one I missed and one for next year, though I will still make you one for your next year’s b-day anyway ^_~. Hehehe. Thanks ^^. Hahaha, Hiei fan eh? ^^ he’s tied with Yusuke in my book hahaha ^^. Well here it is! I love long reviews ^^ so thanks for the long review!! ENJOY!!

Me- Wow, took me a while to be back and check on your story. School's a pain in the butt. My b-day is May 27, so you haven't missed it. You don't need to make me two stories...one will make me happy. Let's see...who do I like as a couple...that's a very good question. Since I am a Hiei fan...let's have him and...I don't know!! *bangs head on couches arm rest* Oh, I know! If it's a male/female story let's have Yusuke and Keiko. And...if it's a male/male story let's have Yusuke and Hiei. Now, it's your choice which you do...I like both pairings. I'm glad to know that you like long reviews, because my last one was VERY long.
I love Hiei's sarcasim in this chapter at the end...it makes me laugh. Good chapter, by the way. What you said about the DT, it's got me wondering...I can't wait to see how you're redoing that. *sits on couch, pondering the possible outcome*
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From Aly on May 08, 2006
Again another fabulous chapter. So that was who Carl was. Need to read the manga all over again. Though I have to agree with you, the manga is alot better then the anime because there is 1.) more info on the character. 2.) more scenes where it wasn't in the anime. and 3.) well............can't think of three but maybe later. 'Wanna Be' was a great song for the fight scene as well. But what was the second song. I'm guessing the song is called 'Girl Power' or something like that but who is it by, I kind of forgot. I still like the idea of reading people's thought, that would be a neat treat. Well, waiting patiently for the next chapter and swing by at my story and see the new re-posted chapter and all. Talk to you later.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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From ANON - inuyashalove04 on April 28, 2006
You- Thanks ^^ I think so too. I re-read what I orginally had....YUCK!!! ^^;; seriously...did I REALLY use to write like THAT?! Hahaha. Baseball scene....I have a lot of baseball scenes in this story because the author of YYH, as well as my self hehehe, are HUGE baseball fans ^^. I LOVE NY Yankees!! GO YANKEES!!!! (slaps self and takes deep breath) sorry about that....Yes I am too. I love reading long chapters, which I know you guys do too hahaha, and I like writting long chapters, though they normally take a lot out of me after I'm done. Yeah, I am trying to add to my fight scenes, but not only that I'm focusing more on your relationship as it grows with Kuwabara ^^. There are also more hints to what Kuwabara knows....oops....wait...was that a hint? grrrr...now I don't know ^^;; hahaha. Well, you won't have to wait too long for either of those, I already started the first chapter to the third season, so as soon as I write that out I will send it to you. ENJOY!!!
Me- I love reading a story that takes time. It seems to relax me...especially if it's an interesting story; like this one! Hm...what Kuwabara knows...na, that's not a hint...at least not that big of a hint. Yay, I'll be betaing again! I really like betaing for you...it's fun. Could be the way that you write or the story, but I really enjoy it. ^^

You- Ok that's it!! Oh, if anyone....and I mean ANYONE...besides my beta and Fayth that is....can figure out what Kuwabara knows and why he is hesitant to letting him self really fall for you....I will write you a one shot between whoever...and I mean WHOEVER you want!!!! ^___^. I won't confirm your guess in answering your review, but will send you a note through your e-mail ^^, so leave your e-mail....oh and if my beta and Fayth want me to write a one-shot of anyone I will hahaha ^^;;; I feel bad that you're out of the prize 'cause you know ^^;;;
Me- Ah, a one shot eh? Hm...I'd like one, yes. But...don't really care whom. If you could, surprise me. My b-day is coming up and...it'll probably suck (like always). So, something like this would make my day a happy one. Anyway...I'm rambling. (Slaps forehead)

I liked this chapter, glad that you didn't have to change anything. I also like the next chapter when Hiei fights...actually anytime that he fights. So I can't wait to re-read the next chapter!! Til then...bye! (Wow...what a long review ^^)
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From Aly on April 26, 2006
Like always that was a great chapter. Just one question that has been bugging me when I read the last chapter,.................who is Carl Lewis? The name doesn't ring a bell and is it in the manga because I'm sure it's not in the anime or did you come up with it yourself. When you first wrote this I must of forgot to ask you before and now that I'm rereading the story and all, now it's digging my brains out. Well anyway, I can't wait to read again for Hiei vs. Seiyuu( if that is how you spell his name I think, maybe not), and see that end of the Saint Beasts as well and can't wait for the later stuff. Oh and I will be reposting chapter 4 and 5 for my story just for kicks but of course I need to do some fixing to edit them. Then after that I'm editing chapter 6 after that with in that week after the other two and then comes the new chapters that I haven't posted yet. I hope that you will enjoy it and all too. Well keep up the good work as always.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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From ANON - inuyashalove04 on April 21, 2006
Wow! This chapter is better than the first time you posted, awesome work! I love the baseball scene...that makes me laugh everytime that I read it. I'm glad to see that the chapters are getting longer...means that you're putting more work into them (ex: better fight scenes). Can't wait to read the other chapters and to get back to work betaing for you. Until your next chapter.
Bye
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From Aly on April 20, 2006
Hey wazup!!! I still liked it when I get to spar Hiei and all. *dreamy look* Oh my daring Hiei *sighs*. Anyway just to let you know that ch. 3 of my story is up know and I'll repost ch. 4 in the beginning of next week. But wow, that is a lot of chapters that your doing. A lot more then what I'm thinking of doing for my story. Well anyway, hope you repost the next chapter for my to read.

See you later,

Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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From ANON - phoenix on April 19, 2006
ooo .ooooo plz update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The plot is really good, normally i'm not a kazuma fan but now i am! XD
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From Aly on April 14, 2006
Hey how is it going. Now I know why I love Botan so much. I love the way she always hits Yusuke with the oar and all. So I forget where you last off before your account was cut off from KuwaL and I forget what chapter you left off. I think you said 31 or 32, I'm trying to remember myself and all b/c I know you left off of the fight with Kuwabara vs. Older Toguro and I know that Yusukes fight was next in line. But getting to the point here, I was wondering how far after 30 or 31 you got. I know that there is still the long way and all and it was the end of the second season of it, how far were you going to stop it from there. Are you going to do all the four season? or the first three? I was just wondering how far are you going b/c you are doing a great job at it. Well that is all I have to review, I will be done editing for my story ch. 2 and will post 3 soon. So see you later.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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From ANON - inuyashalove04 on April 13, 2006
Hello! I would have reviewed your earlier chapters, but...ah hell, I was a little lazy. (Bad Tonya...shame on you) You've been doing really well on posting the older chapters. Everytime I checked the story, a new chapter was up. I can't wait to see how you have this end. I've seen the entire season, and loved it and the way it ended. Well, I'll review later.
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From Aly on April 12, 2006
Hey girl! The chapter was great as usual. It's nice to remember and read it a second time and all. I still think it was funny with Yusuke being a peeing tom and all. I can't wait for the next chapter and all. Oh and thank you for reviewing for my story again as well. Keep up the work.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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From RoseRedBlack on March 31, 2006
I almost got first review. >_< Oh well. I had to read A New Kind of Demon Slayer first so it was my fault. Well you already know I absolutely love this fic and will anxously awaiting all of the changes. This is one of my favorite fics ever. Its really up there in ranking for fan fics. Well please don't keep everyone waiting long on the update cause I happen to know you've been working on this... oops -^_^- don't kill me for that.... and I know you're still hiding that knife from the last thing I almost gave away lol ^_^;;;;;;;;;

please update soon and if you don't just remember I can IM you and haunt you till you do. I know a lot of people will thank me...... but don't worry that isn't a threat... kinda lol ^__^;;;;;;;

^___^

Kat @{--

P.S. Tell your brother everyone is waiting for the next chapter of War lol ... sorry couldn't help it. Blame my Yusuke muse ^_^;

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From Aly on March 31, 2006
Hey wazup!!! I like to thank you for the advise that you gave me to just re-post the thing. I had to do some changes anyway. Well anyway, the story again is great even in a different little verse or it. Well check on mine. I'm just re-editing mine and after that I have a couple new chapters. Well see you later on.

Ang Avalonis :) smiley
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