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Reviews for As we lay

By : chilli
  • From kittyblue on February 04, 2007
    I loved it a lot! =)
    That was just beautiful.
    One of the best YYH that I've read.
    ^__^
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  • From ANON - Toushikku on January 10, 2007
    Hey! I love your story!!!!
    I loved the babies so much I'm making a picture of them to put on my Deviantart.com account.
    Credit goes to you for the idea.

    I hope you tell me how you feel about it!!!

    My SN is Yami-no-Matsuei



    Forever forgetting to login,
    Toushikku
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2007
    That just totally rawked XD I would like MORE! because it rawked yummy!
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on January 07, 2007
    This has to be one of the all-time BEST YYH fanfics ever written. This was such an amazing story! I'm so pimping you in my LJ.

    Really, I love your renditions of each and every character and the entire plot of this. It's incredibly original and something I could read over and over. Not to mention some parts are just plain hilarious! You did a great job on this! I'll be on the look-out for your next work.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 06, 2007
    Seriously, I thought this story was finished. What a pleasant suprise to find a hawt lemony scene for the epilogue! And the kits breaking in and watching them? I laughed too hard at that, they're SO Kurama's kits.

    You have such a nice erotic flow to your lemons, you write like no one else does and it's always a pleasure to read. I hope I see more from you!
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  • From ANON - Liquorish on January 03, 2007
    That was really good. You should write more fiction. Quick question, what are Yusuke's kits going to be?
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  • From ANON - indifferent nobody on January 03, 2007
    it was a good story. the sex was awesome and i was impressed by the way you ended all your chapters. im not a fan of male preg. but yours is probably the only story that i can truly say i liked of that type. thanks for the wonderful story. it satisfied me in every way. truly well written.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 02, 2007
    my god. it's finally complete. i really couldn't imagine a better ending than that. all the loose ends have been tied up and the future looks bright. i especially love the part with the twins sneaking into their parents room then asking what kurama and yusuke are doing. (ten years old and already picking locks. *chuckles*) thank you so much for sharing this with us. it has been long and thrilling ride and i am definitely sad to see it end. this story has been recorded in my green-yaoi-book-of-greatness with 5 stars placed next to the name. needless to say, this is a fic that i would gladly like to revisit sometime in the future. i hope to see more fics from you in the future but if not, please remember that Devious Lil Devil will always hold this fic as her all time favorite YYH story. thank you again, and may you have a belated very happy new year! may the yaoi gods watch over you.

    ~Devious Lil Devil
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on January 02, 2007
    OMG so perfect. Couldnt have come up with a better ending you tried...although you probably did try...ah hell this was great!
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on January 01, 2007
    This was incredible. I couldn't put it down. I am so glad you resolved the situation between Yusuke, Keiko, and Nabiki. You know, it'd be great to see a tale of how Hiei realized Kuwabara was his mate and the courtship. *grins* Excellent work!!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 01, 2007
    wow the last chapter was my favorite, it had so much emotions in it. i loved how the boys at the ripe age of 10 are picking locks and how they caught their parents going at it and yet they are so innnocent that they couldn't figure out what they parents were doing.
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on October 20, 2006
    Lovely Loved it all, stayed up till all hours of the night reading this, I was hooked. Are you going to write a sequel?
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  • From ANON - sam on September 24, 2006
    Loved It!
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  • From ANON - dragonfox of hell on September 18, 2006
    i must say that you are one truely talented author. i love the way this is turning out, although i must say you had me a littled worried there when it seemed as if kurama and yusuke were going to break up *sheds tear* so anyway keep up the good writing.
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  • From ANON - bobii on September 16, 2006
    YAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! omg! Updated^^ wonderful chapter just like the rest of the story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. thankyou.
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