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Reviews for As we lay

By : chilli
  • From ANON - Chyrsler on May 23, 2006
    Yes, i thoroughly enjoyed it. No, i doubt there's anyway it could improved or get any better than it already is. I thought it was postively amazing, and i'm glad thing are progressing and kuwabara and hiei....never would've guessed...interesting though
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  • From ANON - pureevil230 on May 21, 2006
    so cute.
    love kurama and his kits.
    ugh stupid keiko. wonder what happens with biki?
    hope yusuke warms up to kurama and then they become a real family.

    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - YokoKuramas1-n-onlygirl on May 19, 2006
    OOOh! ^ o ^ What Happens Next I love everything so far. What happens next? What? Happens? Next? I Hate Cliff Hangers. Please update soon I wanna know what happens to Kurama,Yusuke,and the kits.
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  • From ANON - Birdy666 on May 07, 2006
    This story is awesome to read, good pace with great characters. I stayed up till 3:00 am this morning to finish. It was so gripping to read I just couldn't stop till the last chapter was read. I loved the visual picture that comes to mind when reading some of the scenes and the birth chapter was great and moving, lots of angst and emotions coming through from Karama and Yusuke both. Hope the next chapter will be ready soon keep up the good work.
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  • From on April 26, 2006
    Awww!! That chapter was so cute and sweet and...a little on the nasty side with the birthing, but that's okay. Kurama is like the cutest co-father ever! It was too sweet everything he did for Yusuke. I really liked this chapter. It was a very fluff chapter but it was still sooooo great! One thing, though, grammar wise that I noticed: You said Yusuke was the 'atheist' of Kurama when I think you meant 'antithesis'. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on April 26, 2006
    This is an awesome fic. The only other word I can think of to describe it is, "Brilliant".
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  • From BlueUtopiah on April 25, 2006
    How the hell do you manage to make a pregnant Yusuke in character? Because it's a crazy concept, but you do it...you wirte a PREGNANT Yusuke IN CHARACTER. I'm still shaking my head in wonder.

    Also - the analysis of Youko's character - how he views himself vs. how others view him and the reasoning behind what others view as his cold behavior was done exquisitely. You gave Youko Kurama more dimension...thank you.

    Kurama seeing the head crowning and it dawning on him that "this is real", was amazing. I can't wait to see him finally seduce our favourite new daddy!

    You SO rule.
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on April 25, 2006
    Excellent chapter, I imagine they are both immensely happy that this part of it is now over with though they may be wishing for the time Yusuke was pregnant to be back once things settle down and they realize babies aren't easy lol Can't wait to read more. Update soon please
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 25, 2006
    wow i love this chapter i especially can't wait to see how yusuke takes to being a mother.
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  • From ANON - nette on April 24, 2006
    So far the story is heating up. I can't wait to find out more of Kurama's motives and how Yusuke will react to them. I am also looking forward to maybe more mood swings from Yusuke, that would be pretty funny and maybe an appearance by Hiei could stir things up.
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on April 23, 2006
    I am so dearly in love with this story right now! I originally read the prologue but didn't return to finish, but now that I'm caught up I can say how awesome it is! There was so much deception and deceit going on. The bonds of love and friendship were tested so adeptly. And you wrote it all so well. I could see it when you described actions and I felt it when you described feelings. It's just great! Not to mention the plot is amazing in itself! I can't believe Keiko cheated on Yusuke!!! He is a great man, that's for sure, to never let her know he knew. Will you tell us who it was with? I really want to know. Also, I love how you wrote Kurama. He really is perfect in this. Cold-blooded but not completely evil. I love it! I also like the interactions and reactions and reasons you have for everything that happens in this story. I truthfully have never liked mpreg stories, but this one bypasses all that. I guess everything else overcome that, but then again, even the mpreg parts are hilarious! This story is just all around great. Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - 4:16am on April 22, 2006
    hey! great fic so far... i kinda don't know what i'm writting exactly, since it's four in the morning, but who cares, right?!
    anyway, i really like this, i just have a couple of things to say:
    1. sometimes you don't finish words. you use the wrong form of them.
    2. sometimes you don't put your sentences together correctly. i still got the point, but i was rearranging words and stuff in my head.
    3. WHO IS BIKI'S FATHER?!!! IT'S KILLING ME HERE!!
    that's about it, so update, and i'll try to find it again and read what you add!!~
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 20, 2006
    Brillance. Absolutely brillant. I'm like this *hold her index finger and her thumb about a 1/2 inch away from each other* far from jumping your Yoko. Damn sexy manipulative bastards. Keep up the great work!


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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 20, 2006
    oohh wow i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From BlueUtopiah on April 20, 2006
    Heh. I thought that the story was completed for some reason, but I am SO GLAD it's not - I was rather curious to see how the pregnancy went.

    Kurama eating the birds was hysterical. I also like you explaining the two sets of sounds coming from both human and Youko ears. This is an incredible story and I can't wait for the next installment! You rule!
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