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By : chilli
  • From ANON - Diane on April 20, 2006
    Like it & can hardly wait for more, I've been checking for updates on this twice a day.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on April 20, 2006
    absotively love it hunny. Keep it up and update a.s.a.p.
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  • From ANON - JouKami on April 20, 2006
    YAY!!!!!! this fic-y is tuning out great.....keep writing, if you dont ill cry.......*tear*
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on April 19, 2006
    The bird thing was amusing, extremely amusing. I could just see the chore it would become for Yusuke to explain to Yomi that Kurama found the birds to work well for midnight snacks lol Can't wait to read more, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - kurakitsune on April 19, 2006
    OH...MY...God! That had to be the best intense Kurama/Keiko fight I've ever seen. I mean normally when I read a Kurama/Ysuke, I expect there to be some turmoil that revolves around Keiko, but that was by far the best breakup scene I've ever seen. Kurama was so cold, calm, and calculating and yet I really believe he was in his element. You did an awesome job on that scene and dare say you are number one at the moment. I did not expect half the things that were said...and Keiko having another man's child just so she could hold on to Yusuke, oh man that was good. Anyway, I think that's it for now. Keep up the great work! Now onto the next chapter.

    Ja
    Kura
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  • From ANON - Sukini on April 19, 2006
    Pretty powerful stuff. I liked the confrontation between the trio, and the fact that it was made sort-of-all-right (though nothing can make cheating completely right) by Keiko's previous unfaithfulness. I do feel sorry for Biki though, paying for the adults' mistakes by being left behind by half of her family.
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  • From ryukotsusei on April 18, 2006
    I have to say I like this chapter the best, the emotions running between all three of them are so very high. Extremely appropriate given the circumstances. I adore how you are portraying Kurama in this, showing his ruthless side with Keiko. That's exactly how I prefer seeing him. Keiko's hypocrasy is amazing, I'm impressed that Yusuke had the restraint that he did, she fully deserved to get some sense at least shaken into her for her hurtful words not to mention attempting to pass of another mans child as his. I cannot wait to read the next chapter, this is an extremely well written story and I look forward to reading more. Update soon please.
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  • From ryukotsusei on April 18, 2006
    Reviewing for Chapter three. I can only imagine what Keiko's reaction to this is going to be, I can't picture her taking this too well. Not to mention Hiei. While I doubt he will be happy at hearing Yusuke is pregnant I doubt he'd be any happier hearing they are attempting to kill the kids off, considering his own background. At any rate I greatly enjoyed this chapter. I'm off to read the next one.
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  • From ryukotsusei on April 18, 2006
    I greatly enjoyed chapter two, Hiei's reaction to Kurama's indescretion was lovely. Just like I would have expected in this situation given the nature of their relationship. I'm off to read Ch. 3
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  • From ryukotsusei on April 18, 2006
    Very good first chapter, this is my second favorite yaoi pairing. I like your writing style and attention to detail. I'm off to read chapter two.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on April 17, 2006
    I read this on ff.net last night, and then I come here to find that there is a PROLOGUE which is drenched in hotness, so I did a little dance.

    This is an amazingly well-written story. You have a terrific grasp on voicing the psychological struggles that go on in the character's minds, and those struggles are very hard to put into words, but you did so wonderfully and effortlessly. I could not only feel what the characters were feeling, but you also had a way of writing it that made it feel like it was almost happeneing to me.

    The erotic scenes are written in such a delicious manner - heated, but not vulgar. Beautiful. The way you portrayed Hiei and Kurama's relationship is the way i've always seen it - they are not bound by conventional morals, therefore they wouldn't have the same problems as Yusuke and Keiko.

    Kurama's actions and words toward Keiko during the last chapter were wonderfully in-character *applause*, I loved how Kurama let Keiko know that he would hit her back if she raised a hand to him.

    I'm glad to see you're back! With aff being down, I was worried that I'd never see some authors again!
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  • From ANON - Kyo-nezumi on April 16, 2006
    Wow another great chapter poor Hiei, Keiko (you bitch!) and Kurama "If I wanted him I would have had him(?)" Damn I love it more more more.
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  • From ANON - stapersbreak on April 15, 2006
    The beginning kinda dragged. I rolled my eyes so much I thought they were gonna slide right outta my head! It picked up around the middle of the 2nd chapter. The fourth was really good. I made a mental list of possible outcomes and you picked A. Good choice. I hope you're not finished though.
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  • From ANON - Joukami on April 15, 2006
    wow......*jumps up and down* me likey me likey..... keep writing
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 15, 2006
    oohh wow the chapter was great and you surprised me with biki not being yusuke. i should have known the girl wasn't his with toushin only being able to make male kids. though now i wonder how kurama is going to make yusuke his
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