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Reviews for As we lay

By : chilli
  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 15, 2006
    that chapter frickin' rocked my socks. especially when kurama got to the part of telling keiko that yusuke knew that he wasn't biki's daddy. great stuff. please tell me that there's more. this story is definitely going in my green yaoi book of shame as one of my faves. i'll be keeeping an eye out for the next update.

    ~Devious
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 14, 2006
    This is writing at its best here. I'm loving every second of this fic. You have, so, picked up a fan for life. This is my favorite yuyu pairing and of course it has been written before but not quite like this. That first chapter left me stunned and second had me hooked. Needless to say that I'll be back for more. I HAVE to see how this plays out.

    I really don't want yusuke to abort. I feel that the loss would wound yusuke's chance at happiness with kurama. Not to mention he probably regret it until the day he died. So until next time, ja!


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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on April 13, 2006
    OMG, you have got to hurry an update, pa-lease. You can not just leave me hangin like this. Please update as soon as possible. I HAVE to know whats gonna happen next...although I can guess but Id rather read it. Anyhoo, keep up the good work and update soon.

    TaTa
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 12, 2006
    nnnoo i don't want yusuke to get rid of the babies
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  • From ANON - Kyo-nezumi on April 12, 2006
    I love this please update I rather H/K but this is great poor Yusuke! Update Update!
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  • From ANON - Aya on April 11, 2006
    wow, i like this chapter alot. thanks for updating. but wait, im kinda confuse, is yuusuke pregnant? or is it kurama? it had grea irony but i actually though they had decided to have an secret realtionship behind keiko. when he called kurama, i though they were gonna have sex, but still wonderful. pls update soon.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 08, 2006
    hot i think i like where this story is going
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  • From ANON - aya on April 08, 2006
    the fics were very long, it would have been more appriciated if you made the story line abit faster as well as the settings that way your writting would have not been a waste. but wow, im very very impress:) good writting skills and i like how you portray them. very good job!! what was funny was before i reviewed it said "review as we lay" lol, but anyways, pls update.
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  • From ANON - Joeykami on April 04, 2006
    i love your fic....*smiles* keep writing.....i get fuel from fics, and i LOVE mpreg for some reason....somthing about a preggie guy thats just HOTT....*smiles evily* wish i could write like you....
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  • From ANON - nytekit on April 04, 2006
    That was a very nice story. Wonderful use of imagery in there. It's definitely one of the best uses of it in a fanfic that I've read. And you not using any names just made it better. And though you didn't use names, it was somehow easy to tell which 'he' you were talking about. Great job!! I really enjoyed this one! Also, nice song choice to use. I heart that song, too!
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