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Reviews for As we lay

By : chilli
  • From ANON - Aots on January 07, 2011
    Loved this story!
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  • From Hemamal on February 07, 2008
    Aw!! All things are forgiven and we get a prefect ending. It's weird that the twins are thinking about mating so soon though. But seeing that they can already pick locks with a paper clip I guess I shouldn't be too surprised.
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  • From Hemamal on February 07, 2008
    That's right Kurama keep charge over your man!!!
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  • From Hemamal on February 07, 2008
    What the hell?
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  • From Hemamal on February 07, 2008
    Yeeaahh! the babies are born! They must be so adorable. Espescially, seeing who their fathers are.
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  • From Hemamal on February 06, 2008
    OMG!!! That was one hell of a twist. Speaking of twists, Kurama was just deadly in his assult. Absolutly flawless!!!
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  • From Hemamal on February 06, 2008
    Poor Kurama! Having to abort his babies has got to be really hard on him.
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  • From Hemamal on February 05, 2008
    Very, very HOT!!!
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  • From ANON - mini.tales on October 15, 2007
    Oooh child! Your writing touched me in places that I would *lurve* to be touched more often. Uhh, huh! Your picturesque writing, leaving out the gory details for me to fill in myself... well al I can say is: THANKS!!

    I believe that the human imagination can do wonders with the tiniest of prompts, and you did exactly that. Again, Thank You.
    I have only read your intro chapter and I made sure it was a accompanied by that very song! Your title made me dredge it up from my playlist and have it on repeat... I even sang along with your lyrics in the end!

    I'm afraid I am a lost cause to your writing. *sigh*
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  • From solitare1 on September 23, 2007
    WOW!!! I loved this story!!!! Right now I'm so moved. I'm glad everyone ended up happy in the end. I am looking forward to reading more of your work> BRAVA!!
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  • From hpobsessed on August 08, 2007
    I've been waiting a long time for this and it was worth it. Very nicely done!
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  • From ANON - Megan on July 28, 2007
    Oh, wow... I just read the first chapter, and it's SO BEAUTIFUL! That is a love scene. I think I'll wait a bit, savoring the warm glow that it is, before reading chapter two.

    Love and lollipops!
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  • From ANON - ILene on July 22, 2007
    OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! I just read ur entire story! It was a fabulous ending! how much would it take for u to make a sequel? Oh, I know! TWINCEST, along with the usual Kurama/yusukeness, threesome with twins and biki? hiei/kuwabara? I wanna know what happens 2 our boyz! both the twins and daddy's-ur the mastermind, i'm just throwing my 2 cents in, PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!! i will love u forever! Yes boyz father is teaching daddy mouth to mouth-naked-in bed- *snort* *bursts into laughter*
    LOVED! GREAT STORY-GREAT SMEX!
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 19, 2007
    AAWWWW... amazing. At the last part when Biki was having it out with Yusuke I was like "shit, shit, shit" and like when Keiko was like abort the children I was all choked up... especially during the confrontation. Oh and during Kurama's confrontation with Hiei.

    Oh don't know why but for reason while Yusuke and Kurama where in the cave I expected the kitsune to pounce him at any moment. Like out of nowhere he'll leap and they'll tumble into bed... I actually pictured a few times Kurama just watching Yusuke trying to get up when he was pregnant. It's like a turtle on its back.. so funny. I really enjoy this story and glad you made it. Ta ta.
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on February 24, 2007
    Awww, It's really over? Can you make a sequel?
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