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Reviews for Switching

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - Raine on May 18, 2006
    Excellent story...I'm very much enjoying it...keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on May 11, 2006
    Very good ending. I'm glad Hiei got to experience the pleasure not just the madness.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on May 02, 2006
    Hm . . . violent material . . .

    Hiei's horror at a violent act he had committed contrasts a lot with how indifferent or downright ecstatic he can get when killing people, but then again, those were never friends or lovers. So I liked the change.

    And that little joke with Shiori at the end, I liked ^__^ Reminds me of something I'm slipping in Jagamino.

    Shall be looking for those possible one-shots in the future, rest assured.
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  • From ANON - morgankit on May 01, 2006
    Yay! You finished it...?

    I thought it was a little fast, considering your other long fics, but it's quite apparent that this isn't like the others in you timeline. XD I changed my mind: I am glad you didn't let Shiori find out about the whole "dominant-demon" thing. She probably would have flipped and forbade Hiei from seeing Kurama again. Maybe...

    Anyway...

    I liked the descriptions of Hiei's visions, no matter how macabre they were, as well as his sudden breakdown. You write BEAUTIFUL love scenes, you know. Don't stop. Especially not with any lovely uke!Hiei you have around. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Sakochi on May 01, 2006
    WAAAAAAAA! (Means I am immensly grateful for the second part of Switching)

    Haunting flashbacks, beautiful lemon, I love it so, and a lot of your other works. Awesome job =D
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  • From KyoHana on May 01, 2006
    You are, without a doubt, the absolutel Queen of Beautiful, Sensuous Love Scenes!! I know that I've said this before, and it's been proven here yet again, but you have SUCH a way with the vocabulary you choose when writing a sex scene -- that one can't help but visualize it in all its beauty and eroticism. BRAVA, my dear, BRAVA!!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on April 30, 2006
    Isn't it great to have a home again? I almost passed out last night when I checked and the entire archive had been reinstated...then I almost passed out again when I saw that you added the 2nd part to this!

    Hiei remembering the night in flashes as he touched Kurama, and then seeing the visual proof of those memories was done incredibly well. I liked that you had him remember, and I LOVED how you explained the Majin form and why he chose not to use that form once he gained a bit of power and control - someone needs to fill in the YYH gaps and there are plenty of them in the canon.

    Of course, you write an amazing lemon. For some reason, you manage to write a hawt scene between our favourite demons without being overly vulgar or filthy - and I don't want to say it's fluffy either - you just have this way about your writing that makes the whole thing seem...real...if I'm making any sense. Am I? I doubt it.

    Besides, being overly vulgar and filthy is my job... :)

    I cracked up when you said that Hiei eats a great amount in one sitting - I totally see him doing that!

    Great story, all in all, gotta love the Kurama torture AND the lemon. You rule again!
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  • From ANON - NyteKit (so not logged in) on April 30, 2006
    Awww! That was nice! This chapter made up for all the pain our poor demons suffered in chapter 1. I like how this turned out and how it fit in the timeline of all your other stories. Short and cute! Great job! ^^
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  • From ANON - hColleen on April 30, 2006
    Beautifully completed. This was magnifcently sensitive and sensual. It was simply amazing. Very well done. *bows to you*
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  • From ANON - morgankit on April 30, 2006
    I would really like to see a continuation of this story - how Hiei helps Kurama heal, Shiori's reaction to it or something of the like.

    It's certainly darker than the other parts of your stories, mostly because it's seme!Hiei who is doing to abuse to uke!Kurama (and I don't really go for abusive-seme!Hiei). I understand that you don't approve of rape and I definately agree, but the it does fit, and I see your point about dirty demonic sex. Most of the stories I read and write have the most perfect love scenes. ^_^;;

    Please update soon! Can't wait to see wait happens!
    - morgan
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  • From ANON - CrimsonFox on April 27, 2006
    Yay! That was a great read, even if it did get a bit frightening for a little bit there. It does make sense though about the violence thing... yes, still a little freaked about that, it's not what I expected after reading your other stories, but still enjoyed it a lot.
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on April 26, 2006
    I am SO glad that you posted this here! I absolutely loved it, though it was a bit different (darker) than what you wrote in 'Coming Clean' and 'Bugs'. I have to so, however, that it is just as erotically beautiful as the scenes depicted in those two fics, and I look forward to the follow-up chapter. BRAVA, once again, on a wonderful fic!!
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