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Reviews for You Said "Yes"...

By : hColleen
  • From ANON - silver on July 12, 2006
    Wow! That was very different than expected! A torture fic and a love fic in one. I really liked the way they fell for each other and the way they accepted their feelings.
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  • From GrayWolf on July 05, 2006
    I think the first chapter was far too long. It also kind copies the show of what had happened in the battle of Kurama vs Karasu.
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  • From ANON - thunderwolf on June 14, 2006
    Wow...
    thats an even more whack version of the Karasu/Kurama fight than I wrote... You could write the textbook on Karasu's sadism...

    My only recommendation is to cut back on the big fancy words. It's irritating and it kills the mood when you find a word you don't know.

    Great fic, though
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  • From ANON - anon(the one who said it was a tease) on June 03, 2006
    lol, i didnt meant to sound so aggressive, lol, its just that i expected some lemony action :P, anywhoo the whole threesome idea is awsm XD
    yay keep writing :)
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 02, 2006
    I know I'm bad, I didn't get to review the last chapter and here you are with the third one already!

    Dude...first there was a mind-blowing lemon: OMG THE POSITION!, then you slap me in the face again with another one, except this time they're in the SHOWER!...you broke my brain...really...I'm surprised that I can type. The psycological aspects of Hiei and Yusuke's struggle with the developing relationship was done very well, your writing is gaining more depth, and I enjoyed the teasing through the second chapter (Yusuke and Hiei checking each other out was funny and hawt...I want a clear shower curtain with a nekkid Hiei behind it!).

    The three of them sleeping together and snuggling against each other as they were forming the bond was so cute and un-fluffy, just the way I like it. It's so funny how you write this story that you think is all about Karasu/Kurama and you muse brings you right back to the OT3. But you OWN the OT3, so I guess I shouldn't be too suprised.

    Now, I'm interested in the original story you're writing...
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  • From ANON - Ryukotsusei on June 02, 2006
    *Grins and beckons before patting my lap* C'mere my pretty, I'll give you that spanking now ;)

    Seriously, I love the way you brought out Hiei's reactions in this. The shower scene was awesome, perfect as it was. I wouldn't change a thing really. Yusuke's uncertainty and need for reassurance was dead on as well, it's good to see him so unsure of himself on occasion. Much love for this story, I do believe it's become one of my favorites. Keep up the great work :D
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  • From on June 02, 2006
    Aw! That chapter was really sorta cute! I actually liked how you spent more time examining each of their reactions to being in love than the sex parts. Kurama really just made me laugh. He was acting so giddy about it all! That was too cute, even for the youko! And Hiei's confusion was right up there with Yusuke's inexperience for me. Great job! It seems George knew what he was doing making this multi-chaptered. ;)

    Oh, btw, since I'm too lazy to go back to your LJ and comment, I'm looking forward to your original story. I read the preview drabble and am already interested. Hope it turns out okay!
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on June 01, 2006
    And what a way to end this story!!! OMG!! Not ONE lemon, but TWO.... and who said the second was sparse!?!? I loved seeing it from Hiei's POV; loved hearing the guys express their love for each other.... hell, I just plain LOVED this story!!
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on June 01, 2006
    Awesome as always. Great ending, I love them together. I look forward to your next story.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not logged in) on June 01, 2006
    Yay! Aff is running much faster and smoother now. I hope it lasts. What a great ending for this story. I love a shy and confused Yusuke. It just makes him that much more sexy, I think. The lemon was hot and the second lemon was just right. It's a good thing listening to your muse, lol. I look forward to reading your original piece. It's sounds romantic. I'm a sucker for romance. But knowing you, you'll have all kinds of angst, twists and turns ^_^ I had to re-work the lemon in my YuYu chapter nine. I didn't like how it was turning out so I had to start over which put me behind again. But, I'm just about done and I love the changes I made. It's really naughty ^_^ LOL
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  • From ANON - Hoshi-chan on May 28, 2006
    *passes out torches and pitchforks* ^_^ C'mon Colleen, get the next chapter up soon or else.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on May 28, 2006
    Another good chapter. I like Hiei and Yusuke working throught there feelings. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on May 27, 2006
    Well, I won't kill you! :) Actually, I think it was a perfect place to end... it just leaves so much more for me to look forward to in the next chapter.... wink.... wink...!
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  • From on May 27, 2006
    Your gay muse really went against you this time, didn't he? Not only is it not a one-shot, but you're going to have more than two chapters! Yes!! No one but you is complaining, so you'll be okay. ^_^

    This chapter was really good. At the end where you had Kurama fighting off Karasu's ki was great! You wrote it like he was in a real battle which made it much easier to understand, I'm sure. Also, all the tension between Hiei and Yusuke really kept me pulled in. It was almost amusing how they reacted to each other, especially Yusuke with how innocent he is in these matters. Great job and update soon!
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  • From ANON - sisko66002(still too lazy to log in) on May 27, 2006
    You have inspired my muses. i do not know how but you this chapter has and for that I am grateful.
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