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Reviews for Before The Storm

By : ryukotsusei
  • From ANON - FluffyFox on September 21, 2006
    I enjoied this one to the fullist! Thanks for putting it up!

    Ja Ne!
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  • From ANON - faerygirl44 on September 15, 2006
    I know its been a while...This was a really great fic...could def see it becoming a full one ^.^;
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  • From kogaluver on September 09, 2006
    Yayyyyyy!!!!! Kurama to the rescue, pointing out how stupid and dense Yusuke is, for example: “Are you even capable of thinking when it comes to something other than a physical fight Yusuke? This has to be the stupidest thing I have ever seen you do." That was a kick ass line. And then he drags Yusuke by the collar like a bad little boy to the portal to Makai.

    It was so cool how Mukuro confronted Yusuke. She’s so cool and no one fucks with her firebrat! Then you had me on pins and needles during Hiei’s fight with those other demons and then Yusuke comes in at just the right moment to save him before Hiei collapses.

    What an awesome build up before the next lemon. And Puu was so cute. And Hiei was so sexy and so Hiei and Yusuke was so Yusuke and the lemon was so HOT and I don’t know what else to say except KEEP THE PORN COMING MY QUEEN OF YUSUKE/HIEI PAIRINGS. I’ll never get enough. And even though I sound like a broken record saying this, I’ll say it again! No one keeps our boys in character the way you do. You are truly a gift to us all each and every time you put pen to paper or your fingers to the keyboard ^_^

    You keep it up. And I want my naked Yusuke drawing with him sporting a big thick cock! LOL ^_^ I need more Yusuke dick!

    Love and Kisses
    KHL

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  • From ANON - Demon Usagi on September 08, 2006
    1. They had to prove their love (not lust)
    2. They had a lover's spat, but it was resolved at the end in a cute manner
    3. No cheesiness
    4. The plot didn't go too fast or too slow. xD
    5. They made love at the perfect moment, and Hiichan was uke!! YEAH!!

    This fic made me all squishy inside. It's my favorite from you yet! I hope to see more of your fics soon. x3 Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 06, 2006
    You know what I like about your fiction? You write STORIES. I mean, I love PWP as much as the next yaoi fangirl, but when there's a good plot AND there's porn, it makes me want to do a little dance...like this: *shakes it*

    The fight scene was wonderful, and you get points for a blind Hiei and for using Puu in such a kick ass manner. Oh yeah AND THE PORN WAS GREAT - I LOVE THE DEMANDING HIEI UKE. YAY.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 05, 2006
    another amazing story
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on September 05, 2006
    Great ending to this story. And I love the way that you made use of Puu in the story, I oftentimes think he doesn't get used near enough. Mukuro's part was interesting too, I'm surprised she didn't somehow show up at that fight the same time Yusuke did. Overall great job. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com on September 05, 2006
    A nice yummy lemon and a happy ending. That's my kind of story.
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  • From ANON - loveless101 on September 02, 2006
    I'm so glad that an author as good as you is as into this yaoi pairing as i am!!! I was surprised to see you on this website. I only know you from mediaminer.org and recently fanfiction.net. Wow, really great jobs on your stories. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - biscuit on August 25, 2006
    well written. please get them back together :)
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  • From kogaluver on August 22, 2006
    Gahhhhh! Yusuke is so fucking stupid. I love my Yusuke but he's just so fucking stupid and dense. And I think Hiei acted totally cool by fucking what's his in front of Koenma, instead of killing them both. Hiei showed a lot of restraint. And I think had it been Kurama, Kurama would have killed them. I also agree with Blue. Hiei topping Yusuke in front of Koenma ROCKS!!!!!!!! Yeah baby, give it to Yusuke real good.

    I can't wait for the second chapter. Now, Yusuke still has to move to Makai so I wonder how everything is going to play out. And I wonder if Koenma might have something more to say or do. I also think that Kurama should knock both their heads together and say "Snap out of it." LOL. But knowing Kurama, he'll just sit back and enjoy the show. He's so fucking evil sometimes.

    Ohhhhh, I just can't wait for more. ^_^

    Love and Kisses
    Kogas Hentai Luver
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 22, 2006
    Why do you win the internet?

    Because Hiei topped Yusuke - WITH KOENMA WATCHING. *standing ovation*

    I liked Kurama in this story. Some writers forget he's a demon (I know, WTF?) and I do like the sweet Shuuichi, but really, he's Kurama and he's demony and evil and sensual and protective of what he wants. You hit that right on.

    Of course it goes without saying that Yusuke and Hiei are acting like idiots, but if they were in a relationship, that's the way they'd be.

    *waits patiently for chapter 2*.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 21, 2006
    damn i can't believe it..i thought there were going to get back togerther now i see i may have to wait for that.i hope yusuke isn't stupid enough to go back to koenma or something.
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on August 21, 2006
    OMG, what a cliffie, and you say I am bad about them. I want to know what happens next. Please? You did a fantasic bang up job writing this. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ursan-canine on August 21, 2006
    damn. and it's all a big misunderstanding. haha. great piece. hope you update soon. :D
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