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By : JessieMorrison
  • From ANON - Deadlyhair on September 20, 2006
    I enjoy this story a lot. I didn't think the first chapter flowed very well into the second (it sounded like Yusuke was supposed to act as a parole officer or something--the word slave was never mentioned--and then suddenly it's all slave this, master that), but I can look past that. Well-written and entertaining.
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  • From ANON - Murail on September 20, 2006
    Now that was hot! I loved every word of this. Really incredible the way you putting the story. Personally, I am a fan of master/slave so this is soooooooo good for me. Wonder if Kurama passed out from the pleasure. Hell I am sure I would. Please update soooon.
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  • From ANON - shiorifoxiesmom on September 20, 2006
    Danm that was hot. I get the feeling Kurama won't want to be released any time soon.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 19, 2006
    WOW. You know, KHL told me about this story, so I figured that I'd check it out, and I'm not disappointed. I love the concept, and you manage to cover a lot of ground without being too wordy, which is a great thing.

    Oh yeah, and the lemon was smoking *dances*
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  • From ANON - Shadow Cat17 on September 15, 2006
    Please update soon!!! I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Murail on September 13, 2006
    Awww, that's just soooooooooo good. I absolutely love it. Hope you will write another chapter soon. I really loved that part when Yusuke was comforting Kurama. It was just so sweet. Not like my brother right now bitching at me to let him on computer.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 11, 2006
    another wonderful chapter
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  • From ANON - candy on September 11, 2006
    wahhh...kawaii... please update soon and if its not soooo much trouble, email me when you do. thanks!!!
    simplydurog@gmail.com
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  • From RenegadeRaine on September 11, 2006
    Hey!

    *Jumps up and down* KURAMA IN CHAINS!!! LEMME AT HIM! *Drools* *Normal Raine comes in with baseball bat, beats down psycho oaku, and packs her back in her box. Puts on glasses and turns round to speak as "educated" Raine.*

    Sorry about that psycho-babbling spaz...she's my other self...she breaks out every now and then. Anyway....

    Excellent story so far! For not having a beta there weren't too many mistakes either, though I did sot a few. If you would like a beta, I would be happy to do it. My e-mail is on my profile.

    I love the spin you are putting on the story, I can't wait to read more, for a new writer you are doing bery well so far. I love it when writing talent meets true anime love.

    *Psycho otaku's voice is heard from inside the pulsating box.*
    I gotta know, do hiei and Kurama end up together as insinuated in the series? what are the pairings in the story? I MUST KNOW! TELL ME!!!!!!!!! Please update soon...pleasepleasepleasepleasepleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!
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  • From ANON - shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com on September 10, 2006
    Oh that started off so hot. I can't wait for things to heat up some more. Update soon.
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  • From kogaluver on September 10, 2006
    Awe so cute. Yusuke's such a softy letting Kurama cry on his shoulder. This fic really is very sweet and different AND IT SCREAMS FOR A LEMON! I'm hoping we get one. If for some reason you don't like writing lemons, then I would gladly write one for you for this fic. Feel free to contact me if you want ^_^ Looking forward to the next chapter. Oh, make sure to remember to space your paragraphs and dialogue apart. It makes the reading easier if it all isn't one big paragraph. Just a tip ^_~

    Love and Kisses
    KHL
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  • From ANON - Charlie on September 05, 2006
    WOW great start! Haven't read anything like it before! I hope you update asap, I can't wait to read more. Oh yeah, what's going to happen to Kurama's mum? Or Hiei for that matter?
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on September 03, 2006
    This has the beginings of a good story and I can't wait to see where you go with it.Now that Kurama is Yusuke's prisoner what of his mom?And what's exspected of you as a prisoner of a near god.Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Cat17 on September 03, 2006
    pleaseupdate soon!! I love Yus/Kur stories and their just aren't enough of them out there!! Unless I am just not finding them!! i love yusuke as a lord!!!!!!! So please don't abdone this story!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 02, 2006
    wow this story semms very intersting
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