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Reviews for Betrayals

By : hColleen
  • From ANON - i_banquet on October 17, 2006
    I can never get enough of hiei and kurama !!!
    Thank you for writing so well ... :)
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  • From ANON - Blossomwitch on September 21, 2006
    ~jawdrop~ How have I missed this one before? I can only guess I was put off by the initial paragraph (I have a minor Koenma squick) and skipped over it at some point. It's incredible. Beautifully understated, and I don't think I could have resisted the compulsion to have them speak gooshy words but you're right, the silence meant so much more. Fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on September 15, 2006
    I loved it the first time I read and I loved it now. Too hot. Kurama needs a good asskicking occasionlly, lol. And Koenma and Yusuke are always hot to read. I know you've got a lot of fics from LJ when AFF was down so I'm looking forward to re-read what else you decide to post. You're lemons are my crack and your writing is a gift to us all.

    I miss you, Princess.

    PS - Answer my last fucking email woman! With you're schedule and the time difference I don't know when to call you. So send me a hello, K ^_^

    Love and Kisses
    Your Seme (LOL)
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  • From KyoHana on September 13, 2006
    It was beautifully erotic the first time you posted on lj, and it is still that way here!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too tired to sign in) on September 13, 2006
    HOLY... ::Leaves a freakin box of cookies:: My god that was awesome! I do hope you have plans for a sequel. Your writing style never ceases to amaze me, and I love the idea of this story and how you put it across. I picked up on the safeword immediately. I have known BDSM and have dabbled in it myself. It is always a smart thing to have and is naturally a requirement, though most people who claim to be into it don't know or care about it. I'm glad you added this in here, and I liked the way you had Kurama and Hiei not admit what they felt, what exactly they did, and the depths of how they did it. Perfection at it's best. Well done.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 13, 2006
    Gods, I've read so much of your stuff today! I actually have to find the original post - I read it so long ago and there's been so much alcohol between then and now that I'd need to read the old one over to see the edits. HOWEVER, this one always stuck in my head - I loved Hiei beating the crap out of Kurama, and the use of the safe word - and how Kurama used it when Hiei was badgering him verbally instead of physically.

    I liked the whole "You wanted the Makai.." thing. For Hiei really is the Makai and I love the association. It's amazing - you wrote so much while this site was down - are there any other stories you haven't posted yet?
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  • From RenegadeRaine on September 12, 2006
    excellent work of art as always...I loved this story so much...it's so very easy to picture Kurama and Hiei in an S&M relationship...will you be ighting any with Hiei as the bottom? His embrace of pain with the dagon and his eye seem to make him perfect for the role.

    Look foreward to your next story.

    -Raine
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