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Reviews for True Dedication

By : koorimesbabygurl
  • From ANON - dragonfox of hell on October 08, 2006
    ok i have been thinking of who you can have hiei pair up with. here is a few. you could have him pair up with touya. i know how you love him and i can't think of any stories that had a hiei and touya pairing. they both seemed to have that cold and lonely type exterior. they would make a cute couple doncha think. touya could teach hiei a few ice tricks all the while hiei could heat up things in the bedroom. and for another person to have hiei hook up with...............................our beloved JIN. *swoons* need i say more. ok for the final. i think he would look cute with botan. so what ya think. if you don'tlike the ideas, i don't care. was just trying to help you out. any ways, i still like the way this is turning out so..... adios
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 07, 2006
    oh wow that chapter was so funny..an arouse yusuke. i like that you had the waitress think yusuke was younger then he was.
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 03, 2006
    Well they did had more fun indeed! And Hiei stalking them and getting jealous, I was certainly not expecting that! I can't wait for your next chapter
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  • From ANON - dragonfox of hell on October 01, 2006
    still loving this story. i know one thing i wouldn't want to be around hiei when he farts or you for that matter. lol. hey, i had other things i need to take care of thats why i couldn't properly beta for you and your taking to long to beta mine. *pouts* so what is taking you so long. *still pouting* are you going to find hiei a mate or are you going to just let him stay lonely and jealous with nothing to do but stalk kurama and yusuke. you know, you could pair him with george *lol* or kuwabara *lol* or even make him straight and pair him with 'bingo' i mean botan.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 01, 2006
    another great chapter i love that hiei is jealous of yusuke because he with kurama.
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  • From wrongonsomanylevels on September 23, 2006
    ok i think your still doing a great job. so are you glad i did a little beta-ing. *unlike you* so beta my stories SHIMATTA! and stop threatening me. and by the way 'Koro shite yaru' and beta for me now. so any way it was soooo cute how yusuke wanted to win the plush for kurama like that. so me likey and thanks for not taking forever to update....unlike some people. cough sinkingintodarkness cough
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  • From ANON - Anna on September 22, 2006
    I only remember one demon with red eyes and dark clothing and it it Hiei! Anyway awesome idea,go to the carnival! Mmm.. I wonder what will they do for the rest of the day
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 22, 2006
    wow, great chapter i bet the person fallowing them is hiei, it has to be, he is afterall the only character with red eyes beside yukina,who would never do something like that. i can't wait to see how dinner goes for our characters. it would be funny if they has a waiter who thought they were togerther and kept living hints to help they relationship.
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  • From ANON - SinkinigIntoDarkness on September 21, 2006
    ^_^ hi! *waves* Figured I should give you a real review while my mind is working ^_~. hahaha. Well I love this story, as you already know. It is awesome to have Yusuke give Kurama a day off ^_~. I hate Keiko anyway hahaha so I'm happy to see Yusuke hanging out with someone less nagging ^_~. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! *cough cough* And I will try to review every time you update! Later!!
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  • From wrongonsomanylevels on September 18, 2006
    ok nette, i am sorry i havent been able to beta for you for that chapter i was simply to busy and i promise i will for the next chapter. i think you are doing a wonderful job. AND WHATS WRONG WITH HAVING NEATLY FOLDED UNDERWEAR. and why would you have yusuke wearing someone else's underwear, EWWWWWWW. i will post one of my stories when my retarded beta reader *thinks of nette* actually reads it and makes correction. *still thinking of nette* and i learned how to be a baka from you. you said i refuse to re-read it, i just didn't have time. sorry, k. ps i'm stealing hiei from you. lol and happy birthday, you old hag. lol


    *wrong on so many levels*

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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 17, 2006
    wow i loved this chapter..a jealous kurama is always good in my book.
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  • From kogaluver on September 17, 2006
    I do love this story very much. I always take an interest in any Yusuke centered fic as long as it's written well. This most certainly qualifies. I loved the subtle jealousy Kurama felt. Kitsune are very possessive, and even though Kur/Yus aren't an item yet, I think Kurama's demon instincts may be taking over a bit, lol. I'm also on pins and needles waiting to find out what actually happened between Keiko and Yusuke. Keep up the great work! I'll be checking for updates ^_^

    Love and Kisses
    KHL
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  • From kogaluver on September 14, 2006
    I love this fic. Yusuke was so cute the way he was fighting with the dishes and stuff, too funny. I like the whole idea of this and the way you're approaching it. Great work and I can't wait for more.

    Also, next time you need to make changes to a chapter don't delete the entire story. Delete one chapter at a time immediately replacing it with the corrected chapter. That way you won't loose your reviews or hits. ^_^

    Love and Kisses
    Kogas Hentai Luver
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  • From ANON - Tori on September 14, 2006
    Very nice story!
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  • From ANON - Halloween on September 13, 2006
    Yusuke dacing to Hips Don’t Lie” by Shakira! loves it. if you every saw the video. ' Move B**** gte out the way' the guy daceing on the stage shaking his butt,,, reminds me of hiei.. i' think i;m die laughing.
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