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Reviews for Waiting to Love

By : saiyanb
  • From sesshomarunaraku on August 24, 2007
    this is great!!!!!!love it!!
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  • From cienne on July 26, 2007
    Uwaaaahhh!! This is just one of the most fantastic YusukexHiei story ever! You really make it happen. Isn't Hiei the most lovable, bestest, cutest lil uke in the whole world? *cries while biting keyboard*

    It's really lovely how you made Hiei a kid in the fic who blossoms into a fine young man. And Yusuke's steady but surely developing love for him is teh bomb! And your love scenes are really hot! Wish I can write hot stuff like that. *cries*

    Thank you for posting this. I've been a fan of yours since I read Koorime Litter. The guys just can't get enough of uke-Hiei. Woohoo!!!

    Keep up the wonderful, great, fantastic job!
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on May 08, 2007
    great story! it was wonderful! i was wondering if you could maybe make a sequel for this one where Hiei gets pregnant? you don't have too, but it would be very nice if you did! :) i don't normally like Yusuke/Hiei pairings but you did a great job! this is one of the only stories (plus all of your other ones!) that i really like with this pairing. my favorite pairing is Kurama/Hiei! :)
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  • From ANON - chrry_pnk on October 30, 2006
    That was sooooo cool!! I loved it a LOT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kita on September 30, 2006
    Ahhh, it's so good to see something new from you! ^^ A very nice Hiei/Yuusuke fic, and it was such a surprise to see new fics on your profile! ...I've been a fan of The Meikai War for a few years, so now that I know you're still active I'll go review that, too~! -^^- Lovely little fic you've got, here. Thanks for the new material! It's as well-written and excellently planned out as ever~! :3
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on September 24, 2006
    it was so good you should write more!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 19, 2006
    You know, I did a little dance when I realized that you posted another story. I'm a big fan of Dreams and The Meikai War, and I know that you had other fics, but I hadn't seen them. This was amazing, really epic. I could sense the quiet hurt that Hiei was going through, and you have a way of just writing a simple sentence that conveys all of Hiei's pain in a manner that tugs at my heart. Also, you write some smoking lemons: I think my brain broke when Yusuke told Hiei that he was going to touch him everywhere. Really, too much to comment on, besides the incredibly creative idea of the Dragon moving to Hiei's back, I loved Kurama and Shizuru ogling the newly developed Hiei, the entire scene where Hiei was dancing and chanting by the hopsital, and how Yusuke's memory came back to him in flashes.

    Really well done, I hope you post more.
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  • From ANON - Bob on September 19, 2006
    You definitely have a great story here I hope you update. There are a few spelling errors but other than that it really was great. I'm not trying to be a butthole or anything but I think you should ahve made that chapter into more than one so it would flow better. Other than that I loved it. I liked Hiei's dance... instead of fire baby it was fire dancer.... anyway keep writing because you have talent.
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  • From ANON - sweetnsexy89 on September 18, 2006
    This is the best story I have ever read!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on September 17, 2006
    Awesome fucking story. I was a little worried at first that this was going to be another 'one of the guys gets thrown in the dungeon with a teammate, and then one gets hits with lust spell, they fuck and that's it.' Now where that isn't totally a bad thing ^_~ It's been done to death. So it was refreshing that you really changed things up. I loved the way you wove Hiei's past into the story causing conflict with his feelings for Yusuke. Even though he was terrified, Hiei still helped Yusuke through the spell. Then, you had Hiei remove Yusuke's memory of the incident. How selfless of Hiei not wanting Yusuke to be burdened with guilt and also not intruding into Yusuke's and Keiko's relationship. It was smart that you thought of Hiei waiting it out until Keiko's death or to see if Keiko waited for Yusuke for him to maybe reveal his feelings to Yusuke. Also, having Hiei still a child was great. It explains a few things, I think. And then to have him come back as a grown up bishy, well, you had my heart singing. Who could resist the firebrat, not Yusuke.

    I thought it a stroke of genius having those fucking thieves from Hiei's past come back wanting to hurt Hiei all over again. But, I knew that Yusuke would come to the rescue.

    I just love a happy ending. Yay for Yusuke and the firebrat.

    Oh and I loved that Kurama and Shizuro (sp) hooked up. And that Kuwa and Yukina hooked up with kids (a little orange headed Hiei) too cute and funny. And then the whole birth control bit was funny as well. I loved Kurama in this. You had him lighten up bit, lol. I've been reading a lot of awesomely written dark Kurama fics, which I love, but this was a nice distraction from those.

    Great job. I'll be looking for more of your writings that are Yusuke centered ^_^

    Love and Kisses
    KHL
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 17, 2006
    wow i loved this story i loved how hiei during the whole series was a kid(i always wondered why he was so small) and then he grew up after. i loved how you had keiko not wait for yusuke because in the series if he hadn't of came when he did keiko would have stop waiting for him and also got rid of the conflict that would of come if she did.
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  • From ANON - ursan-canine on September 17, 2006
    OMFG!!! i love this one!!! haha. for real. i've read this in makai black market before... OMG! please put up Forbidden Love soon!!! thank you so much! :D :D
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