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Reviews for Kowareta

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - SweetDreams on October 11, 2006
    That was so good and so sad. I'm almost crying right now, but you did warn me. You have a beautiful way with words and your originality is incredible. I'm very impressed. There were points when I could actually feel my stomach churning and I curled my legs up to my chest, but call me a masochist, those are the kind of stories I like. The ones where you can feel what the character is going through. I look foreword to more of your stories. ^-^
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  • From 1Severine1 on October 09, 2006
    Uhm, no hints towards a Hiei/Kurama relationship?!?! Haha, really this is such a good story. I was going to time myself on how fast I could read it but my Internet turned off halfway through. I had to wait a whole night till I could read it! Do you know how much pain I was in?! Well you should be happy:) I could never write like this. I'm always too scared to use a certain name too many times. Like instead of using Kurama you use fox or something interesting...when I do that I end up using fox more then his name, which makes it shitty. Great angst though! It's stories like these I will take tips and notes on.
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  • From ANON - Jamio on October 07, 2006
    I seriously have tears on my cheeks right now. That was incredible... so many have tried, yet so few achieved the K/K you have...
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  • From ANON - Mea aka yaoi_lover00 on October 05, 2006
    Yeah, I wanted to review here too. I repeat everything I said in the journal. The vegetable idea was completely original; it was great, etc. I also like that part in the beginning about the wine. The way it was described and...(damn, I'm not good with words!) I just loved that whole paragraph. It was interesting and, again, very creative.
    I love characters with mental disorders. I love psychological torture. That is why I enjoyed this fic. I fully enjoyed the breaking down of Kurama. That's as blunt as I can say it. This is why an 'insane, homicidal Yukina' fanfic would really interest me. I understand that you can't write it now, but maybe in the future (1 year, 3 years, I can wait). I would love to see your homicidal Yukina.

    Sincerely Mea aka yaoi_lover00 ^_^
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  • From ANON - lunar_eclipse24 on October 05, 2006
    I said it before, you actually managed to squick me with this. Especially with the vegetables. And the vials. The marker thing, more than anything else, kind of hit me with just how broken Kurama was at the end. And the reactions of his friends and family, especially Shiori and Hiei, were also painful as well as in-character for the situations.


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