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Reviews for Kowareta

By : mhmartini
  • From ANON - Rina on August 18, 2010
    Yeah defiantly a dark story, but wonderfully written. I actually didn't expect that ending at all. I've only recently started reading fanfictions again and the trend is what can be called a 'happy ending', but you stayed true to the character of Karasu. Very enjoyable even if the ending was sad.
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  • From amskitty214 on February 05, 2010
    ...Holy crap.

    Holy crap man, you're blowing my mind

    It was amazing, but at the same time, I want to punch something...

    O___o Great job, man, great job.
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  • From RenegadeRaine on June 30, 2009
    Oh how I'm a gluten for punishment...I just re-read this story again. It's still so beautifully sad. I'm still going to be using tissues for a good hour or so, but fiction this deep, meaningful, and emotion-invoking deserved a second read...
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  • From ANON - Sekah on March 02, 2008
    This story has been blowing my mind for about a week now. It's absolutely one of the best KarasuxKurama fics I've ever read.

    The emotions are so real I almost feel as though I'm in the room with them, feeling the fox's shame. I would also like to thank you for making the disorders the fox faces absolutely true to life. RTS and Stockholm Syndrome are rarely added into fics; it makes me completely jubilant to see them immortalized in yours. Thank you so much for writing this!
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  • From solitare1 on January 14, 2008
    That was deep! WOW, I'm at a loss for words. Great story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 18, 2007
    i want to cry

    i am crying

    sad

    why

    why...

    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - Dreamseeker on December 14, 2006
    I think this story scarred me.
    I love your writing so much, but you frighten me.
    I'm not saying that as a bad thing, as that's obviously part of what the story was meant to do. I'm just letting you know it worked.
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  • From ANON - Verum on December 10, 2006
    *_* Not to sound to harsh or anything but... HOLY CRAP! That is by far the most disturbing peice of fiction that I have read in a while. But beyond that, you do have a nice writing talent, if not a little spooky though. Keep writing, and if my stomach can handle it, I'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Liz on November 26, 2006
    You never cease to amaze me. I can't even begin to explain what I'm feeling after reading this. It's so horrible (the situation), and also so beautifully written. The ending is so bittersweet. I really shouldn't review directly after finishing a wonderful story such as this, because I seem unable to write a coherent review :p

    All I can say is, "wow." I hope to read more stories from you soon.


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  • From ANON - comicfancat on November 12, 2006
    Wow,I mean Wow.I kept waiting and waiting for Hiei or Yusuke to come for him or for him to wake up and be in his moms arms with the crows head on a stick in the tree out side his window or something.I'm not sure how I feel to let the crow win,I sit speechless.I can't imagine what was going though your mind as you wrote this but wow,You did good.
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  • From ANON - Tsunora on November 06, 2006
    That was sad, horrible, scary, and somehow beautiful. Well, not beautiful...perhaps...haunting? That's probably a better word.

    That is to say that it was wonderful, but in a horribly creepy way. It's hard to explain what I mean, but I'm pretty sure you got the effect you wanted.


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  • From RenegadeRaine on October 23, 2006
    I honestly don't think I've ever cried so much while reading a single story... This was trully an emotional rollercoaster, and a beautiful work of literary art.

    Now if you'll excuse me....*sniffles, gabing box of tissues and favorite kurama episode while heading to bedroom.*

    P.S. I don't know if you received my e-mail or not, but I have started a group on Myspace dedicated to Yaoi writers, and I'd love for you to be one of the first members...it's not much to look at yet, but check it out if you want...

    http://groups.myspace.com/AFFYaoiAssociation

    -Thanks!

    Raine
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  • From LadyYeinKhan on October 13, 2006
    Beautiful...absolutely beautiful. I think this may be one of the most wonderful and dark fanfictions that I have ever read. Your style is absolutely magnificent, your word choice is astounding and you truly know how to grip an audience and hold them until the final phrase. I applaud you. You are defintely one of my new favorite fanfiction writers.

    and for those who are curious, I believe kowareta means "broken" in Japanese. At least I'm fairly certain.
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  • From colorlessegyptian on October 13, 2006
    Can I ask something? What's 'Kowareta' mean? If you decide to let me know, you won't be able to e-mail me, because it's screwed up...somehow... Anyway...

    Great.../sniffle/ Now you've got me all teary-eyed! But that's a good thing, because this is probably...no...it IS the best angst-centered story I've read on almost any site! Poor Kurama...but I love the way you've done this. I wasn't too big on the death thing, but yah, you warned me. This story is awesome! Not many people can pull something like this off, but you did perfectly! Thanks!

    ~colorless egyptian
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  • From ANON - zekesbabe on October 11, 2006
    Wow. That was powerful. I'm actually reduced to crying. Although I can't relate to Kurama'a predicament exactly I can relate to some parts. Some people are twisted...and to think that those twisted people are allowed to walk free when their victims are left in a torrent of self-hate that eventually leads to their death...in Kurama's case he was lead BACK to his death in Karasu's wake. It just completely hit me hard.
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