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Reviews for Unexpected Consequences

By : ForbiddenRyu
  • From Nekedo on September 26, 2018

    I still love this story, and I wish it had been finished. I really enjoyed your writing when you were active. You wrote Hiei/Yukina beautifully while keeping them in character. I won’t be foolish enough to hope you’ll return someday. Your writing did influence my own when I first venturing into lemons, so I’m grateful for what you did contribute. Thanks for the memories, and hoping you’ve been doing well all these years.


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  • From ANON - Chikage333 on March 26, 2007
    AAAaaahhhhh..I LOVE YOU *squeals like a fan girl* Thank you for another awesome chapter!!! I hope for more to come soon!
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on March 26, 2007
    Awww, I love the soft(?) side that Hiei is beginning to show at the end of this chapter. For all of the bastard that I know he can be and normally is I know that somewhere he has it deep down inside him.
    That was a wonderful idea that Kurama had, having Yukina meet Shiori. I think it will make it easier for her having another mother to turn to (if that's what you're planning to do)
    I can't wait to see what Yusuke and Kazuma's reactions will be to the news. Please update soon.
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  • From RenegadeRaine on January 11, 2007
    Yet another excelent chapter!Please update soon! I love this pairing, but you're one of the few that I've seen pull it off believably...keep up the good work.

    -Raine
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on January 10, 2007
    Yukina should have had the good sense to know that Rui wouldn't tell her something like that for no reason. But if she had to get pregnanat anyway I couldn't think of a better guy to be *daddy* I feel sorry for them both but to be honest I feel just a little (ok, a whole lot) more sorry for Hiei.
    Looking forward to more, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - AishaHawking on November 06, 2006
    *fans self* Wooo. Evil, evil cliffie. Can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From RenegadeRaine on November 03, 2006
    Omg! that story was wonderful, and horrible all at the same time! lease don't torture oor Yukina too long...I've been waiting for smeone to attempt this pairing, and I love your approach! More please!
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on October 31, 2006
    Poor Yukina and Hiei, this has got to be so distressing to the both of them. It isn't like anyone else will be able to help them either altho I think it might have been amusing if Kurama had walked in during that little scene, but I'm perverse anyway LOL. Can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kimisan on October 30, 2006
    Thats an evil cliffy woman! What's going to happen to Yukina now? Poor girl, so oblivious to what is going on. Makes one feel sorry for her. But I love it. Keep up the good work. *Hands you Aoshi cookies*
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