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By : EmbersEye
  • From ANON - bob on November 30, 2006
    That was.... interesting and original to say the least. It was also written well but it just made me angry that Kurama would just lie there like that. Anyway I can't wait to see what happens please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Someone on November 29, 2006
    O_O Poor Kurama!

    But still, it was amazing! The way you write is just stunning!
    Wow! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!! Pweeaaase? *Puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - neko kitty on November 29, 2006
    omg omg omg he really did it he raped kurama O.O hatanaka should be happy that hiei didn't see them because he would be dead nice chapter you know what will be great hatanaka bouding kurama to the bed post reaping him again and Shiori chatching them
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  • From ANON - nette on November 28, 2006
    damn. thats all i can say. the 1st chapter got my attention but this last one....damn. poor kurama...all this for his mother's sanity...man he's...i just dont know man. i wonder wat will happen next, will hiei find out? update soon and great job with this one
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 28, 2006
    Oh god...wow...um...yeah, and I lost my brain somewhere in the middle of the chapter - that was rough. BUT THAT'S A GOOD THING. I have to say that I've read ALOT of fanfiction and I've never seen that done in the YYH fandom before *applause* THANK YOU for giving me something fresh and new AND well written. You're a joy to read.

    A ton of good lines in this, but the two that stood out the most for me were:

    “But in everyone lurks an Othello, she will believe me with time." and "His nerves were singing the Holy Grail."

    There's so much wrongness in this chapter, it made we wince, and I suspect that our favourite fire demon will come to some sort of misunderstanding before he comes to Kurama's defense.
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  • From KyoHana on November 28, 2006
    I read chapter one over on ff.net and thought it was fantastic! But I have to say, it was nothing compared to the brilliance of this chapter. Not only did you use just the right language to convey the rape, but you kept it from being too graphic while still maintaining the erotic and painful nature of the scene. BRAVA!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on November 28, 2006
    Wow what a chapter number 2 turned out to be.I still think Hiei should find out and do some small damage of his own,maybe even have Hiei and Shori find out together (evil)So does Kurama have a small upper hand or not in this after all telling Shori goes both ways.
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  • From ANON - fire_lilly_fox on November 28, 2006
    I hate his stepfather. You have given me good reason to feed him to the hounds and wait til he begs for mercy. I want to see what hiei thinks about this when he finds out. that human wouldn't last 10 seconds in hieis presence let alone what he might do to him.
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  • From mhmartini on November 26, 2006
    I like it. So little actual information was ever given about Hatanaka in the series (unsure about the manga) that I think you're safe taking him pretty much anywhere.

    I really like your writing style. You give enough information and detail to form a nice, comfy mental picture without bogging down your story or your reading with unnecessary "stuff." It's very enjoyable to read your stories and I look forward to the remaining chapters of this tale.
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  • From ANON - Someone on November 26, 2006
    OMG! That was awesome, please PLEASE Oh pretty please with a huge strawberry covered in chocolate cream on top, update!

    I really wanna read the rest! PLEASE UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fire_lilly_fox on November 24, 2006
    this is really creapy. I love it. cna you please update soon? I want to see how kurama handles him.
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  • From ANON - hellcat805 on November 24, 2006
    Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - unrivaledbeauty on November 23, 2006
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Marikalay on November 22, 2006
    I'm definately interested in the next chapters of this one. I'll have to try and remember to look it up again.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on November 22, 2006
    Wow,what do he mean by "get to know me" I bet I know and Hiei's going to hurt Kurama's stepdad very badly.Can't wait to see Hiei angry,plus what about Shori is she going to find out something isn't right or is Hiei going to mess with his mind via 3rd eye?
    Can't wait for the next chapter and hope its soon and that you have a great thanksgiving
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