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Reviews for And Baby Makes... How Many?

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From ANON - A fan of KxH on December 19, 2006
    There were a few mistakes that needed to be fixed like when Kurama called Kira an angel you misspelled it and spelled 'angle' instead. Also you put some of the words in present tense and then had the rest in past tense. In the future read over your chapters before you publish them to make sure they make sense or even sound okay before you post it. Or, if you don't know if you can, have someone BETA it for you. Email them any chapters you have done and are planning on posting, so that they can read it over and fix any of the mistakes you might have missed. This is a good idea because that way the story is more enjoyable and makes a lot more sense.

    Also, maybe from now on you should make your chapters a combination of two chapters that way there's more to read for everyone who like World's Apart, because I know that I loved World's Apart. I would definitely like to see more of this story and would love to know what happens in the end. Anyways, try and find someone to look over it for you. In your next chapter advertise for someone who can read it over and fix your mistakes if you make any. I’m sure there would be someone willing to check your mistakes out. I would even be happy to do it if you wanted someone to.

    Anyways finally, good job on this sequel so far. It has a really good plot idea and I think this story is cute so far.
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