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Reviews for Was It Just A Dream

By : MidnightPrincess
  • From Marikalay on May 06, 2007
    Wow. You made me blush, you naughty thing. Looking forward to reading on through your work.
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  • From ANON - AmyMcClair on December 28, 2006
    I liked the story well enough. I know I have read it before, but I don't know if I reviewed it the last time it was posted.

    What I can say aside from liking the story line was that there are a lot of typos and grammatical errors. For instance, you have written Hieis and Kuramas instead of Hiei's and Kurama's. There were also a few sentences that were missing capital letters for their starts. Another thing that I noticed was the occasional his instead of he or h instead of he and the like. I have done this myself when writing. The brain is just working faster than the hands are typing. I recommend either getting a beta or waiting a week or two and then re-reading the story aloud. It will slow your brain down enough for you to possibly catch any errors.

    I am sorry this was so drawn out, but I hope it helps.
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  • From ANON - shiori_foxies_mom@yahoo.com on December 25, 2006
    You know that feeling of de ja vous when you read a story. I knew I liked this but wasn't it longer? LOL
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