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Reviews for Hidden Hatred

By : mhmartini
  • From pantherrose on May 24, 2007
    Oh my goodness! I knew I read this one somewhere before - and I've really been looking forward to reading it after seeing that post Blue linked to! Aw, I still feel so bad for Kurama, but you wrote beautifully for this fic.
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  • From AmyMcClair on March 01, 2007
    Excellent story as usual. Just wanted to point out a typo in paragraph 17 "off ear." I think it should be "of fear." Otherwise, I love it.
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  • From ANON - Lara on January 06, 2007
    I really loved your story. U must continue,please? Kurama is really in character and i liked the slit wrist scene.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 06, 2007
    You know that this was so amazing that it inspired my own filty "Kurama's a cutter" story in response, and I've been writing nonstop all week.

    And I TOLD YOU that people would love it. I've been scanning fanficrants all week and no wanking, so you're safe! But seriously, I loved this. I love Yomi, I love the brutal sex, I love the way Kurama slides up the bed during penetration, and the last sentence owns my ass.

    YOU RULE.
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  • From ichigokun on January 03, 2007
    I thought this fic was going to be bad when I started it. But you turned it into something wonderful. Yomi was IC throughout, and I felt Kurama's rejection of his body. Good work!
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon on January 02, 2007
    Ah ... so good. Yomi, aye, he started out with some compassion ... but I guess instinct generally wins in the long run, huh?

    I loved the last line. I don't know if you're going to continue this into a multi-chapter story or not, though I fervently hope that you do.
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  • From ANON - Shuu on December 31, 2006
    O.O wow you out did yourself this time. I LOVE yomi/Kurama just more... nice and simple not so bloody or rapeish, still good, I always love your work.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on December 29, 2006
    Wonderfully well done! You've captured completely I think the difficult character of Yomi -- who both misses his old superior, and who wants vengence against him, while adding depth in explaining with few words and more action demon culture. Of course you've also captured a possible aspect of Kurama's struggle to define himself. Poor Kurama, with his desired salvation just outside beyond his awareness.
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on December 29, 2006
    It may not be a new premise by any means, but you have turned it into something so full of beautiful pathos with your words that I could not only feel Kurama's pain and self-loathing, but also picture the scene between the fox and Yomi as it happened as well as the small red-eyed figure who watched the one he loved the remainder of the night.

    BRAVA, my dear, BRAVA!
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  • From ANON - Sukini on December 29, 2006
    Wow! Please say that this is just the beginning!! I'm not into pain in sex(I promise!) but that was just such a new insight into Kurama's human 'condition'. Poor bloke! And what about Hiei? There has to be closure!!
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  • From ANON - Kurama_is_mine on December 29, 2006
    that was a sad story i do hope that you continue cause hiei and kurama are my favorite pair and yomi dont even get me started how could he do that to poor kurama!!!
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