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Reviews for DEMON DESIRES

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From ANON - shuuichi on January 11, 2007
    okay okay so I barely EVER review but I must because.. this is like omg the best fic EVER if you don't do any more three somes.. omg O.O you found your calling.. only a bit more graphic detail in the sex but thats just meXD
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on January 11, 2007
    Good as always,great as exspected
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  • From ANON - nette on January 11, 2007
    all i hav to say as i read this fic is "what took u so long to write this!" i always wanted to read a good fic that had our fav demons together and u hav honored that vision, thank u. i luvd this chapter and was very pleased i must say. cant wait to read more. p.s. i luv kyo, he is too cute. ok peace
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  • From ANON - xKuramaxHieix on January 11, 2007
    The scene was awkward, and felt a little out of place. You tried, don't get me wrong, I think it was done okay. The scene was a little awkward and so was the end. I think you could have improved at the end, adding more, and stuff.
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  • From ANON - Darkriver on January 10, 2007
    I love this story!!! And belive me I know how hard it is to find a good YYH story!! Can't wait till you up date. Till next time. laters!

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    @(/ LOOK I MADE YOU A RABBIT!!! So please update soon k?
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  • From ANON - xkuramaxhieix on January 10, 2007
    Sorry, I've been reading, just not reviewing. I frikken love your stories! I love the 'World's Apart' and it's sequel 'And Baby makes....How many?' They were both frikken sweet! This one's awesome too! I love this one too! Though it makes me depressed when you don't update everyday like you did a couple chappies before! I like this one lots. Maybe next one you could do is a one shot with a seme Kurama again? xD You can do something where Kurama makes Hiei the 'attract youko's cologne'. Cept he meant to give Hiei a different one, but makes a mistake and gives Hiei the youko cologne. xD That would be cool too! xD Keep up the good work on your stories. Oh and it would probably be good that I mention your story is good so no one reviews since it's so fucking awesome!
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  • From ANON - Kerbear on January 10, 2007
    It gets better every time I read it.Sorry I havn't reviewed like I should but I've read this on FF.net as well and loved it there.I didn't think to review it here as well.Sorry.Make no mistake though this is very good and you do very well with lemons.
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  • From ANON - trabeck on January 10, 2007
    I LOVE IT I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!^-^
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  • From ANON - lermbay on January 10, 2007
    I am in absolute love with your story. If I ask nicely, will you continue it? Please? =^.^= *paws at*
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  • From ANON - Midnyte Wolf on January 08, 2007
    Hum... I don't know. I must admit, this story started out wonderfully. But then... as it started to pick up... not so much.

    It was like... ho-hum, how to phrase it? Like a nice cake batter in the beginning. Then you added milk, and it got all smooth and lovely. But then you just kept letting that milk flow until everything got all watery, clumps broke up, and there was just no structure or real plausible action anymore. It just all became watery...

    But I don't know, the MPreg idea will probably keep me anchored to the story for a while.
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  • From ANON - bob on January 08, 2007
    i really like the direction this story is going and the way it is written, i feel kinda bad for yusuke though, hopefully you'll fix that update soon

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  • From ANON - Anna on January 07, 2007
    I love your fics; the perfect blend of sweet, erotic and romantic... just the way any good love story should be! As someone who was sick at home and read them all within the last few days, I hope I'll be forgiven, then, if I make one small beta observation: The word you've been looking for is 'writhe' - not 'wither', as these boys always seem to do in your tales. LOL, either haul out your Webster's or just trust me when I say that 'wither' is definitely NOT something that a man should do in bed. ^_^
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  • From ANON - jem89 on January 07, 2007
    OMG! I love this story! It's wonderful, I really think that this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - bob on January 07, 2007
    As great as more fluffy stories are I think this is more believable than all the fluffy stuff. i really like this and I'm looking forward to Kurama claiming Yusuke, I'd like to see how they will interact.
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  • From ANON - thoth_moon (not signed in) on January 05, 2007
    Hm, you're right, certainly not your customary fluff. ^_^

    I really like it so far. The two seem very in-character, and I have my idea as to whom the question mark in the summary represents--let us do some sexy demon algebra! If "x" (Kurama) + "y" (Hiei) + "z" (?) = hot demon threesome, find "z." "z" = ...
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