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By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From koorimesbabygurl on March 25, 2007
    aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww this chapter was sssssssssssoooooooooooooo cute XD. i luvd how u made yusuke and hiei so dominant that they would have actually fought kurama that was hot. i can't wait for u to update so update soon.
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  • From Staphanie on March 24, 2007
    sorry i didn't review for the other chapters but damn tis story is great! i've always loved H/Y/K fics. i mean having one with the other is godd too, but having all three of them together is just hot. keep up the great work. can't wait to see what happens between them.
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  • From ANON - hpgryffin on March 24, 2007
    I love that you write a conflicted Kurama. He's in love with both men, but gets jealous when he sees or feels them being touchy-feely towards each other. The conflict is really good and very exciting for the story and makes for the angst-slut in me to really relish it. So, thank you! It would be even more exciting and sexy if someone comes along (too bad karasu is dead) to provide a formidable competition for Kurama's affection. Kurama is in a very vulnerable state right now. As you showed in the latest chapter, one of his options is to escape and get out of the relationship. Demon jealousy is good. But to have both Hiei and Yusuke jealous of Kurama is the best thing ever!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on March 24, 2007
    I didn't think Chapter 8 was bad at all. Hiei and Yusuke betrayed Kurama, and it would be abnormal for Kurama to just accept the two of them and watch them be intimate with each other without some distress. You're analyzing Kurama's reactions and portraying them accurately.

    Oh yeah, and the sex was hot. Our favourite kistune needs time, but he will be won over soon - who can resist Yusuke and Hiei, after all?
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  • From kerbear on March 24, 2007
    I thought chapter 8 was great.It should take Kurama a little while to get used to having to share his lovers with each other.Watching him be the dominated one is interesting as well and shows just how much he loved them both to allow it.Info or comfort chapters may not always be fun but they are needed and this one was done quit well.Nice Job and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Drumanel on March 20, 2007
    WOW!!! You are so great. I look for your ficcies EVERY time I get on AFF. You are one of my favs and you keep out-doing yourself everytime! Keep it up. I can not wait to see what is next.

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  • From BlueUtopiah on March 20, 2007
    Wow. That chapter went up FAST. I barely had time to read the last one. I liked your different take on the markings and the matings, it's obvious you've put a lot of thought into that. I also liked Shiori's last question. :D

    And on another note, I really love that you're writing more erotic stuff now. I say do more yaoified stuff like this, we're talking about this story over on LJ right now.
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on March 19, 2007
    i luv your stories *bows down* i'm not worthy to read your fics they are just too good. man i can't wait to get to your level. i hope you update soon so we can hear wat are fav demons will decide. i hope things work out for them, they're too cute to be alone. XD
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  • From ANON - lilevilgurl on March 19, 2007
    i just found your story today and i have to say this is really good!!! i love how you kept yomi and kurama friends. in almost most stories i've read, yomi and kurama are potrayed as enemies. i personally think they should stay friends in any story. any way, i love your story and i like how you update frequently.im excited to see what happens next in the next chapter.i think you should've done a lemon with yomi and aya. i would've loved to see how yomi uses his new pet. lol. but without the lemon its still good. so, keep up the good work!!!
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  • From kerbear on March 19, 2007
    Wow,Shiori is very calm and observent to whats going on.One more question she may want to ask as well is"if the marking go'es on to long without an answer does Kurama lose any free will"after all in this phase he is nothing but a slave of sorts to the guys.I can't wait for the next chapter ,great job so far.
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  • From ANON - Shuichi on March 19, 2007
    I love it, but I love threesomes that include Kurama and Hiei, but I also love Kurama/Yomi. I do like what you did with the new youko and Yomi, but not as great as I would with just Yomi/Kurama XD But you are right, Yomi has became sophisticated and cultured and would probably not take Kurama by force, I dunno, but if you also look at how cruel he is in the anime, and probably manga*haven't gotten that far yet* He, if wanted, would go that far, ya knows? ^^ anyway, I will shut up. I love the fic, keep posting.
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  • From ANON - ss_dragon_lady on March 19, 2007
    Great, Great, Great Chapter!!!!! I am looking forward to the next one. I can't believe I'm asking for this, but i hope you make this a threesome mating. it actually sounds wrong if it's not, because one of them will get hurt. I hope you do make this a threesome. Hurry and update, please!!! ^_^
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  • From BlueUtopiah on March 19, 2007
    Gods Hiei, whatever you just did do it again, it makes him moan so nice around my cock.

    Yeah, and that's where I broke my arm. YAY PORN. That whole scene was very inventive, I liked that there was some play, and then they talked, and then our boys insisted on more play and Kurama was claimed. Beautiful. Yaoiland is the best place ever.

    And Hiei being in control? Hawt. WRTIE MORE.
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  • From kerbear on March 18, 2007
    Chapter 6 is a big "wow".What a way to say we're sorry to the fox.Wondering what Kurama will say when his head clears all the way,now that he's mated to both of them with out his say on the matter in love with them or not.Very well done
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  • From ANON - hpgryffin on March 17, 2007
    I'm almost afraid to say this, but I feel that Kurama does not deserve either Hiei or Yusuke. If either of the two truly were in love with him, either of them would not have cheated so easily with the excuse that they have "feelings" for each other too. They should at least have made an effort to resist the attraction or at least talked it over. Hurting should not be done so easily and I don't think it can be healed just as easily. I think Kurama should have given Yomi a chance. Having a relationship does not quickly escalate to sex and stuff. As everyone knows, love and relationship are built on respect and trust. Still, I am very intriqued with the story, although I'm really, really irritated with Hiei and Yusuke. I'm a big fan of threesome between Y/K/H, but this time, H and Y deserve each other in a bad way. I hope you make the two idiots suffer muchly. Thanks for the read!
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