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Reviews for Unforeseen Fate

By : kimisan
  • From inumoon3 on August 12, 2009
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From reamane21 on September 13, 2008
    great story. what happen next.
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  • From inumoon3 on July 14, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I really loved this chapter, and I have an inkling that Koenma might be pregnant! But that's just me, and I'll never know if you don't update! So update soon!
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  • From inumoon3 on March 17, 2008
    Please update soon!!!!!!! I FREAKING WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!!!!
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  • From inumoon3 on December 08, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!
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  • From inumoon3 on October 19, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From psycicfox on October 16, 2007
    I absolutly loved it. Please, please please put up a new chap soon!
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  • From ANON - inumoon3 on August 13, 2007
    Can't wait to read the update!!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From Pyrokage on July 13, 2007
    Please send me an email when you update this story.
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  • From ANON - SugarfreeCandy on July 09, 2007
    more!
    poor kurama...yusuke just forget about keiko!
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  • From ANON - xtranew on July 09, 2007
    I must confess that the sole reason I read this fic was originally because of the unusual pairings. And by unusual, I didn't mean Kurama/Yusuke, but Hiei/Koenma, because they are a very, very rare type of pairings that will only grace Yu Yu Hakusho one every 5xx FanFics. This sets up such a different background and opens many previously unexplored casualties.

    The dialogs are on spot and the character's descriptions are nearly flawless---nearly, because I noticed that you're downgrading (although it was almost invisible unless someone squint real hard) some characters here. And I liked how you went into the gradual process of the building relationships, the "coming-to-accept-the-invitable" without moving too fast nor too slow. Especially in case of Yusuke/Kurama.

    I can never get enough of Koenma's not-so-innocent-act without cracking a smile in the end (
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on June 08, 2007
    damn this is good. poor kurama i hope he gets the relationship he deserves in the end. looking foward to the next update
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  • From ANON - Katonie on June 06, 2007
    Hey! This story is kinda' sad so far. What with Kurama being in love with Yusuke and all.
    Okay, so I got this idea, it's just a suggestion, but could maybe make Yusuke realize that he doesn't really care for Keiko. Personally, I hate- and I MEAN hate- Keiko, I totally agree with what Hiei said about her being annoying. Also, when Kurama said that it would only be a few years before Yusuke'd have to leave the Makia anyway-cause he wouldn't age- that would be a great thing for Yusuke to contemplate.
    I also really like how hiei and Koenma are together, you don't see that very often, that's for sure.
    Yeah, so anyway, your story is really awesome-even with only one chapter- so keep up the good work!
    hugs & kisses

    Katonie
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  • From ANON - ShibuNoNeko on June 04, 2007
    I got to admit that I was rather hesitating due to the Hiei/Koenma pairring, but it was actually good. You definitely got me hooked^_^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 04, 2007
    oh wow. That was too excellent. Please update a.s.a.p.
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