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Reviews for Growth of a Spirit Detective

By : azalea
  • From yaoihentai69 on August 09, 2007
    New Reader: OMG! I absolutely LOVE this! The idea, the way it's written, the ones that are involved. EVERYTHING! I even had to change my background to Yusuke! XD I can't wait till you update! I may just have to save this to my computer tho, for whenever I have the urge to read an awesome fic. (with your permission of course. ^^)
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  • From quillbabe on August 06, 2007
    omg, this is hottt!!!!!!! please update, I LOVE Hiei/Kurama/Yusuke couplings, and there just aren't enough good ones in the world... update update update, please!!!
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  • From hpobsessed on August 05, 2007
    Oh! Very very interesting!!!! I am very excited about this story!! I can't wait to read more! I love when Yusuke is all insecure in his
    feelings but Kurama/Hiei won't let him be! Update soon!!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 03, 2007
    dude, that was hella hot!! man, my yusuke is one hot bitch! that's one of many things that i love about him. can easily be a super seme one minute or a really hot bitch in the next. i just loved it when hiei was yanked on top of yusuke and he yells "impatient" then gets to work. lol! dude, i, so, cant wait for your next update. i wanna know more about this mission and plans of how hiei and kurama plan on courting yusuke and they better be courting him after marking him like that. *is in protect yus-chan mode* see ya next time.

    ~Devious

    P. S. misuse of botany *snickers* looks like the best way to use it to me ^__^
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  • From Toushikku on August 03, 2007
    Another one! Another one! That was so awsome I had to read it twice. :)
    I'd love to have skills like yours. I hope you continue, you have my full and undivided attention with this story.
    I can't wait to see if Yusuke accepts them as mates or if Hiei and Kurama all-of-a-sudden leave or something. I hope this hasd a happy ending.
    Pleeeaaaasse keep going! You inspire me to write good fics too! :D

    forever forgetting to log in when I need to,
    Toushikku
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE.
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  • From ichigokun on July 14, 2007
    You're still going strong, girl! I like your explanation of Raizen and Yusuke's species' mating habits, very inventive. Plus everyone's still IC. GO YOU!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 14, 2007
    man, those dreams of his sure are sumthin'. i love the way hiei kept nudging kurama, trying to tell him gently but when he finally got his message across... to see the look on kurama's face. anyway i look foward to your next update. i cant wait to see poor yusuke get some help with his 'problem'.
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  • From Pyrokage on July 12, 2007
    Please send me an email when you update this story.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 09, 2007
    Raizen never liked his heat cycle, either- preferred to run and exhaust his body so completely he couldn’t fuck if the bitch sat on him and did everything herself.

    That was the line that made me sporfle and choke on a tater tot. I BLAME YOU. Overall, a very good chapter. I like how Hiei and Kurama's bond is such that Hiei wants to help, but goes to Kurama to get clearance before he proceeds. Not really ownership, more like respect, and you illustrated that well. I want to pop Hokeshin one though for not realizing that Yusuke wouldn't know about his heat cycle. I mean, sheesh! the boy used to be human, do some thinking Hokeshin! And I can't wait for Hiei to help Yusuke with his problem.

    And BTW, I loved the dream sequences. So gorey and vivid and wonderfully written.

    A minor critique: The correct spelling of Yusuke's demon species is Mazoku and Mukuro's name is spelled, yeah, the way I just spelled it. *grins sheepishly*
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  • From ANON - Toki Mirage on July 09, 2007
    *tears like niagra falls* WHY?!! OH GOD WHY SUCH A CLIFFHANGER!!??!!! HOW CRUEL AN AUTHOR YOU ARE! CRUEL CRUEL /CRUUUUUUUEL/!!!! T-T
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  • From ANON - tori on July 07, 2007
    why did hiei leave? did i miss something obvious?
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  • From ANON - Juxxy on July 06, 2007
    I love how you've written this. Very well done. I kinda wish that you'd have Yusuke bottom at least once. THAT would be hot!
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  • From ichigokun on June 27, 2007
    I really liked this chapter. There were a few spelling errors for the characters' names, though. But it wasn't so bad as to pull me out of the fic. Your characterization was excellent as always.

    And yeah, your view on Sensui is pretty much IC. He's either gay as hell (with Itsuki and perhaps sleeping around with his team) or completely asexual, depending on how you interpret canon.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 23, 2007
    See...that's the way the series should have ended: Yusuke stays in Makai, Kurama tells his mother and lives as a liason between human and demon worlds, Hiei and Kurama start a relationship. Something about this chapter just left me feeling warm despite the Yusuke angst. And I wouldn't really call it angst - you presented Yusuke and the issues he had without overdoing it or making it OMGDRAMA. I liked the way you wrote this - Yusuke is having issues with his power and Hiei/Kurama's relationship, and he withdraws or tries to forget about it by overworking his body. That's a common way people deal with problems. I also loved the chnages you made in Yusuke's physical appearance, and the way you had Hiei and Kurama begin their relationship - no fanfare, just an offering and an acceptance.

    You really tied up a lot of loose ends with this chapter, if only the anime writers took a page from your book. That's why I love fanfiction - the Makai Tournament was sloppy at best and fanfic writers clean up the mistakes and - in your case - give the reader some kind of closure that we can be satisfied with. I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the lemon - that's gonna be crazy!
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