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Reviews for Growth of a Spirit Detective

By : azalea
  • From BlueUtopiah on June 18, 2007
    I really liked the recap on this one, how you illustrated the scene from Hiei's POV, it was almost like watching the show - just from a different angle. And the lemon? Yeah, I had to be somewhere and I decided to be late because I wanted to read this. The lemon was very fitting for Yusuke and Hiei - no words, just raw lust and carnality. The biting and the scratching and the throwing into trees and onto the ground would be just what happens between them - you hit it dead on. And I really had no problem with Hiei being uke - especially with the way he rode Yusuke *braindead*. And the part where you fit the invading demons in? That's genius right there.

    I also enjoyed how you wrapped the chapter up - Hiei ignoring Yusuke yet not ignoring him, and Kurama picking up on exactly what happened between Hiei and Yusuke. Lovely. You're fucking awesome!
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  • From ichigokun on June 18, 2007
    Wow. Just wow. But before I sing your praises, there are a few things I have to nitpick about: Your prose is a bit too purple, but it's not jarring enough to be distracting. I think you got the boys very much IC (especially Yûsuke!), and I like that you didn't bash the girls or Kuwabara (or Sensui, for that matter). Your sex scenes are pretty hot, and you seem to have an extremely wicked sense of humor (I spit out my drink when you described Sensui's taste in guys (by Yûsuke) as "tall, dark, and gruesome"). So keep on writing, and hopefully you'll iron out some of the kinks!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on June 18, 2007
    whew! *fans self* that was too hot for words. i just love your writing style. i'm glad i'm not the only one that thought that something happened between hiei and yusuke during that scene. me and my friends call scenes like that suspect moments. we'd be like "those two just popped up outta nowhere together and they were together for a long time...they were soo fucking!" lol. anyway, i'm glad my reviews encourage you to write more. i went back and reread "drip" not to long ago and saw that you were thinking about writing a sequel but i'm glad you didn't. i think that fic ended perfectly and a sequel, i think, would've tainted the feelings between the brothers. i look foward to the first chap of this, seeing how kurxyusxhiei is my fav threesome of all time. so until next time , ja!

    ~Devious
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 17, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story... I mean really... Oh if it's possible can you e-mail me when you update again? I never really go to the yu yu hakusho part of this website so I don't know when the next time I'll be back here. The look on Kuwabara's face when he stumbled in on Kurama and Yusuke was priceless. I was kind of hoping on seeing how he'd react to Yusuke when they saw each other during decent hours but I guess not. And I don't mind that you reiterated some of the scenes from the anime... It's been a while since I saw it and it was fun recreated it in my head again... Kurama's prone form standing their at the tournament while he lost concsiouness... it brought back good memories.

    Anyway my e-mail is simplywandering@yahoo.com

    And thank you for a good read.
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  • From Marikalay on June 17, 2007
    lol. Granted, I like reading about Kurama better, but that was pretty good, especially at the end when Kurama was laughing at Hiei. No fears, it measured up just find.
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  • From Marikalay on June 14, 2007
    It's really good so far, and I'm looking forward to your update.
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  • From Staphanie on June 11, 2007
    i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From kitkit on June 11, 2007
    me like i can't wait for the next chapter, you should have yusuke try the bottom role if he is going to have sex with hiei next. i just can't see hiei as the submissive type
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  • From Staphanie on June 11, 2007
    i want more give me more!!! :)
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on June 11, 2007
    that was amazing! i loved it. i look foward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - bob on June 11, 2007
    Oh my god u have 2 update this soon. Its believable and creative i cant wait 2 see how hiei fits in
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  • From DuosAngel on June 10, 2007
    Great fic! Don't worry about using diologue from the anime, it's not that bad a thing to do (and I've seen it used in worse ways). I hope you don't take to long to update because damn I just gotta have more!
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  • From kogaluver on June 10, 2007
    I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter too, although, for me, there was too much word for word re-cap of the episode. But that's just me, lol. I would have preferred Yusuke's thoughts while watching Kurama fight, or a summarized re-cap. However! As soon as you added your own spin and originality I was swept away. The lemon was as hot as they come. I loved the desperation Yusuke felt and his total lack of experience and knowledge of what was happening to him. And, even more so, was Kurama then taking charge to "help" Yusuke out, lol. But, the most lovely twist, was even though Yusuke was inexperienced, you had Kurama bottome. That was priceless and unexpected. And the way you weaved the lemon was so real and plausible and believable. You really have outdone yourself. I also appreciated that you didn't take the easy way out and simply bashed Keiko. You handled her perfectly. I'm looking forward to the Hiei/Yusuke chapter so much. Nicely done.
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  • From Dragon7 on June 10, 2007
    Grate start!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Lemonychocolate on June 10, 2007
    Very, very good! I loved the dialogue and the bouts of introspectiveness Yusuke displayed. The characters pretty much stayed 'in-character' throughout your story.

    Excellent job!

    It's about time Yusuke gets some of Kurama.

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