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Reviews for The Destiny Of Men

By : LadyShinomori
  • From ryukotsusei on July 09, 2007
    Very nice continuance from the Yusuke/Kurama side of it. Leave it to Yusuke to screw things up so badly that Saitou needs to step in and tell him how to fix it. I definitely like how your willing to do the more unusual pairings outside of the normal Kurama/Hiei range. While Yusuke/Kurama isn't exactly rare it isn't overwhelming the fandom either. And I still say the Hiei/Saitou was awesome.

    I'm not sure if you're looking for other pairings to write but I have a list of those I'd love to see someone tackle. Yusuke/Soubi(Loveless), Hiei/Akabane(GetBackers), Hiei/Naraku, Yusuke/Sniper, Yusuke/Saitou, Hiei/Karasu, Ban(GetBackers)/Kurama, Yusuke/Kazuki(GetBackers). There's tons of others if you ever want to have a pairing tossed your direction. Just let me know. Great job sweets, I'll catch you later on yahoo :D
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  • From ryukotsusei on July 09, 2007
    I just want to thank you for a lovely conclusion to a pairing I'd never seen before. I love the way you brought Saitou and Hiei back together, patching things up between them. The lemons were hot as well, definitely an extra treat for us. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing what other interesting pairings you come up with.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2007
    OMFG That last lemon on the Kurama/Yusuke was very hawt! Yes, please do write a Hiei/Kurama and also a Yusuke/Koenma
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  • From ANON - Jellyjane on July 02, 2007
    Never thought of Saitou as being that way but nicely done. More spankings please! Can't wait to read the Yusuke/Kurama but can you write a Hiei/Kurama?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2007
    that was naughty i liked it

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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 01, 2007
    This second chapter was completely made of win. Not only was it nice and long, you had five incredible lemons in it, a heaping dose of angst, violence, and even attempted suicide! LOVED IT!!!!!!

    *applause*

    I don't know what you were talking about when you said you couldn't write yaoi lemons well, because all five lemons were incredible. You manage to convey Hiei's innocence and sensuality well, and you executed his sexual learning curve in a beleivable way. Every lemon was different and crazy, and you do dirty talk really well too, and I love dirty talk in my lemons. I also love how crazy dirty this is because of the stepson-stepdad factor. And then you threw in that car accident, and all that angst sjdgksgfksjfljshlhfl I can't stop thinking about this story.

    When you post the Yusuke/Kurama lemon I'm gonna need earlpugs to keep in my brain.
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  • From kogaluver on July 01, 2007
    That was hot as hell! I've spent the entire afternoon reading both chapters, sheesh, and I though I write long chappies. Well it was well worth it. You had me glued to the sceene until the end. I never would have paired those two together, but in the AU world it worked out great. Very angsty and the sex was totally hot. Who wouldn't get all worked up spanking Hiei's cute little bubble butt ^_^

    I'm really looking forward to the Kurama/Yusuke chappie.

    Love ya
    KHL
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 16, 2007
    You know, I don't know anything about Kenshin, and I rearely read crossovers, but I like this one. The lemon at the end was vivid and really hot, I liked the Stepfather/Hiei thing, and the dirty talk made my brain melt. Well done.
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  • From ANON - rayne on June 14, 2007
    holy fathermucker... that was hot!

    oh my god, I want more. :P
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  • From ANON - Ryu on June 14, 2007
    Holy shit lol Saitou definitely put Hiei in his place didn't he. I'm curious to see how Hiei is going to take him disappearing like that and what's going to happen. I'm not sure that he'd tell anyone but Saitou leaving like this is definitely going to leave a bad impression. Can't wait to read the second half.
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