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Reviews for Falling and Forgiveness

By : whispirahangel
  • From Foxfairy on July 23, 2007
    In the kingdom of Yaoi it's called lube! OMG you have almost a rape set up and are trying to pass it off as love?!!! Add in the few times Kurama says NO, and the sex itself. BLAH! INCONCIEVABLE WOMAN! You have to be a female cause if not you'd know that men do NOT produce a natural lubrication. Okay, no matter how pretty Kurama is he is not a female. He might dribble from his dick but his asshole doesn't produce lubrication. You have Hiei shoving it in with no lubrication or no prepping. Okay, any man needs to be prepped. Can we say OWE? He'd be in some serious serious pain with what Hiei did, not to mention his crapper would be bleeding like a bitch. He wouldn't be feeling complete he'd be feeling voilated. Do some research b/c the idea of him just ramming it in don't fly.
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