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Reviews for Gang Banging the Toushin

By : kogaluver
  • From ichigokun on September 16, 2008
    Delightfully dirty. Your writing is the porn equivalent of devil's-food cake.

    You got the guys pretty much IC. I was a little worried that you were going to bash Keiko, but then you put in something from her point of view.
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  • From zsfantasy on May 29, 2008
    Wow, what a wonderful story. I hope that you will update this fic soon, I hate to see it as one of the many forgotten fics on this site.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2008
    OMG I LOVE THIS STORY PLEAS UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2008
    aboslutly amaing pleas email me at Princesssdragon@aol when you update
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  • From TimeFlys on March 18, 2008
    Chapter 1: So Hot! Is been forever since I read this, so of-course I had to reread it again. (Everything’s better the second time around... or the third...or the fourth...XD.lol) I love this story and can't wait till the 2nd chapter. (There will be more right? Please?!) One of the things that stands out the most in this story is both the completive and dominate personalities of all the characters. I enjoy how even though Yusuke’s the bottom he’s still as commanding/strong as ever. (I love Yusuke as bottom but don’t think a submissive Yusuke is in his nature.)

    But my favorite part in the whole thing is that everyone was able to be Yusuke’s first in some way. Whither it was being fucked, fucking someone or giving oral they were all his first in one way or another. And the way you put it together was nicely done- getting everyone’s POV while keeping the action moving. (Must have been hard at times.)

    Anyway I loved it and can’t wait to read more. ^_^ I hope you continue this. (All give you cookies if you continue to give me smut! XD lol.) Bye for now.

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  • From TimeFlys on February 25, 2008
    Wow! ^_^ I love this Fic and can't wait to see where you go with this. I'm really glad you made Yusuke the bottom because he rarely is. And it seems that all the one's I've read with him as a bottom, are either poorly written or he's really wimpy all of the time. You were able to keep his demanding personality and passionate nature even with him as a bottom and for that you have my undying gratitude.

    I hope you continue this story and can’t wait to see more chapters from you. (You are writing more chapters to this aren't you?)
    *Review gives author big, sad puppy eyes.*
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  • From yaoihentai69 on February 14, 2008
    OMG! This was freaking amazing! I couldn't get enough. I need more! ToT I've been deprived of Yusuke loving for soooo long. x_x
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  • From ANON - clarissa on February 01, 2008
    luved the story but instead of making it a two shot story u should continue it and like have keiko saying she forgives yusuke but in reality she cant and wont let him go and yusuke at times thinks about going back to her becuz of the history they share but he doesnt go back instead he moves on and forgets her like she did him. newayz i liked this story and the seduction of urameshi yusuke but i think that u shouldn't cut the lengths of the stories down becuz then it wouldn't feel like the same story and also the lemons in the chapters r really good the best i've read so u shouldn't cut back on those either. all in all th story is perfect the way it is. plus kurama/yusuke are my favorite couples there just cute together so good luck w/the stories there greeeeeeat.
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  • From solitare1 on January 15, 2008
    KUSO! WOW!
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  • From Kirie321 on December 11, 2007
    This was fucking amazing! Holy crap! Normally these stories creep me out but holy fuck balls! That was intense and it was awsome! OMFG! You need to write more. Now! Like right now! I'm talking get your damn fingers going and write more, right now! Holy crap! That was amazing! Totally love you for this story. You are awsome. Thank you soo much!


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  • From Hemamal on October 24, 2007
    Oh wow!!! that was extremely hot!!! You must continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - jade on September 15, 2007
    please keep on writing. I want to read what will happen next. I can hardly wait to read more.
    Thanks.
    Jade
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  • From kitkit on August 20, 2007
    wow yusuke is just a little slut

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  • From ANON - Touchmysoul on August 08, 2007
    Yeah! I finally got to read it!!! And God!!!! I'm gonna die soon,...I hope you get the next part out on Monday the 1th. Cause that would be the best birthday present here!!! I'm finally gonna turn Twenty-Seven!!! Yeah!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2007
    Love your stories, this is a different twist on Yusuke's heat cycle. Hope you continue this one.
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