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Reviews for Gang Banging the Toushin

By : kogaluver
  • From hpobsessed on August 06, 2007
    The only thing I have to say is, that was HOT! And please continue it of course!
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  • From Toushikku on August 04, 2007
    O___o; holy shit. *nosebleed*
    write the next chapter!!! *runs for tissues*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2007
    THERE ARE ONLY GOING TO BE 2 CHAPTERS? T-T
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  • From ANON - Liquorish on August 02, 2007
    I take back my question about the one shot. HOLY SHIT! Passes out from to many happy thoughts. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Liquorish on August 02, 2007
    This is going tobe more than a one shot right?
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  • From ANON - crazyanimechick on August 01, 2007
    Dat one bang up job you did there. Keep it up and I will keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Megan on August 01, 2007
    And you say the hot one's gonna be chapter 2? Maaaaaan, I can't wait! So good...
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  • From ANON - +?+Himistu+?+ on July 31, 2007
    -blood spurts violently from nose- OMG! That was so hot!

    Damn! Were is my seme when I need him!?

    -runs of to find him-
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  • From hColleen on July 30, 2007
    Y'know, woman...I'm sure you know...that...that...so hot...brain...all melty. *splat on the floor* You're the one who writes teh_PR0N! Seriously...damn.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 30, 2007
    Heheheheheh. I still laugh my ass off every time Jin says: "That be the one!" Like I said, you really nailed Jin's accent. Some people mangle it, but you wrote it awesome. And props for even including Jin, he's sexay as hell and doesn't really appear in fanfic. You really hit his character dead on. Also: "I’ll be bettin’ ya once he gets him a taste a dick, he won’t be chasin’ dat girl’s pussy no more," is fucking classic.

    Christ, I beta'd this and I still am in motor-breaking mood when I read it over. The position, and the mild Hiei/Youko fanservice makes me sweat. I love how Mazoku are bottoms, and how Yusuke is dilated and self-lubricating. Finally, the self-lubricating uke ass is a reality! But dude...Youko's cock scares me. Poor thing, he never had a chance to really fuck a mate without hurting them until Yusuke came along. See, this story has a positive message: embrace your demon heat - you'll do all your friend's a favour!

    Snicker.

    But really, what else can I say? You took a hashed, overused plot device and breathed new life into it. You wrote it the way it should be written: great characterization and mad hot smexing. A foursome. You fucking rule!
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  • From ANON - LadyShinomori on July 29, 2007
    Finally, I had some free time to get around to reading. I about fell out my chair reading the self lube job Yusuke was able to do. Hehe, good thinking. He's better than a bitch. I needed some smut and you delivered. You know I'm going to ask for a sequel. Or some more smut! Some decent hardcore boy playtime to read. They should have taped that and then sent it to Kuwabara. Show him how good a dick in the bum feels so he'll stop being so homophobic. I watched the Chapter Black episodes the other day and it's really annoying on how homophobic Kuwabara is. Like when Itsuki was talking about Sensui, and Itsuki said something about he'd hoped to become Sensui's lover and Kuwabara acted like it was a contagious disease like Scarlet Fever. *Sigh* Okay, Okay, Itsuki has some bad taste cause I personally think Sensui is EWWWWWW... but Itsuki was a doll and deserves some lubbins too. Yeah that's my request to you, write me a one-shot with him and one of the guys. (no Kuwabara) I'll let you spank me and I'll be a good girl for you. Alright, I'm done I think. Yeah good smut and glad you added Jin in there, he's a hottie too. Much love for you, your loyal bitch!
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  • From Staphanie on July 29, 2007
    i want more now.
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  • From DuosAngel on July 29, 2007
    This is too good! I want you to update this before 'The Seduction of urameshi Yusuke'. These four together is just to damn hot!
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  • From akume on July 29, 2007
    That was HOT. Please add another chapter soon. ~licks lips~
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  • From ANON - kerbear on July 28, 2007
    WOW
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