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Reviews for The Accident?

By : ForlornVampMistress
  • From ANON - Wry-grin on February 03, 2008
    Nice little fic, a little hammy the way it ended, but rather nice anyway... kudos
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  • From KyokiHinote on November 27, 2007
    Sequal? Please! I would only love you forever and ever.

    This story was amazing and funny, good Kuwabara stories are a little hard to come by sometimes. Your writing style is brilliant.

    I must say, though, I would refrain from author's notes in the middle of the story. It's just not good writing. If you feel like you have to say something, add footnotes so you don't disturb the flow of the story.
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  • From KuwaLover on August 17, 2007
    That was extremely awesome! Ok...for the contest I made out a little sheet for me to fill out sooo here it is:

    Originality: (0-25): 25. I haven't read a story quiet like this. Very original and extremely entertaining.

    Creativity: (0-30): 30. Not only did you throw me off with that ending, but you did it with style!

    Spelling/Grammar: (0-15): 12. There were a few spelling/grammar errors, but it wasn't so bad that I couldn't really enjoy the story; only a few parts I had to stop and re-read to make sure I had read it write though ^^; Otherwise I did enjoy it.

    Total Points/Additional Coments: Overal, it was extremely enjoyable and realistic to a point. Excellent work! 67 out of 70 points.
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  • From ANON - Touchmysoul on August 17, 2007
    Whooaa.....

    *Does the running man in joy*

    There are more and more people starting to make Kuwabara get loved more and more! I like it when my husband gets a little loving from his mates, and best friend!

    *Kicks pepple that laying on the ground*

    Hmm...Can you make a sweet loving, full of smex KuramaxXxKuwabara paring?. With Kuwabara the uke, there's nothing better than a uke Kuwabara! If you do, I love you until the in of time and I'll give you cookies!!!And cookies are yummmy!!!!

    Loveable-Touchable,

    ~Touchmysoul

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