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Reviews for Shura's Quest

By : 66Hiei08
  • From thothmoon on April 14, 2008
    *laughs* Naturally, Suzuka of all people would notice the difference between Kurama and Lazurama. Well, maybe with the exception of Shishiwakamaru XP

    But Enma sure should delve deeper into his intelligence before making such rash decisions. Oh, but wait, that's right: he's a politician. You're very realistic to that degree, haha.
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  • From thothmoon on April 13, 2008
    So that's the relation! I suspected that Kurama and Lazurama might be something like that. And your hint at Yusuke and Kuwabara is piquing as well. Much drama and action to come, no?

    And as far as people biting so far, it took a bit before your other stories caught on also. I'll continue promoting!
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  • From thothmoon on April 09, 2008
    Ah, so Lazurama's being coerced...

    Um, Durga is an incarnation of Parvati, one of the chief goddesses in Hinduism. As far as the woman you have made Koenma's mother in this story, I don't know offhand. But Enma himself in the series is sort of a blend between the Japanese deity and his Indian counterpart (Yama), so making a Durga Koenma's sister is feasible.

    I recall that in the series Enma was a bit of a ... yeah, at times, and you're reflecting that well in this story. Now let's hope Durga prevents him from inflicting the wrong thing on the wrong person, yeah?
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  • From thothmoon on April 05, 2008
    Okay; at first I had thought that Kurama's doppleganger was a shape-shifter, but then thought not, and this confirms that? I still wonder if there is some sort of relation between the two, other than the identity theft. And Kuwabara's vocab--we *do* use bigger words in college (finally I can carry a conversation without pausing to define something). Another great chapter XD
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  • From thothmoon on April 04, 2008
    So--Mukuro might not be dead? Interesting...

    Some action-y chapters you have here. (Poor Toya; I've seen rambunctious passengers before, but man...)
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  • From thothmoon on April 03, 2008
    0.o Shura ... did. NOT. just--heh, well, from the very end of that chapter, it looks like the old Ganderran Lord might not be *quite* out.

    We've got a better grasp of the plot as well in this chapter--that kid is *so* dead...
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  • From thothmoon on April 03, 2008
    Interesting ... but I'm a little confused. This seems a little abrupt--but then, this says that it's Scene *13*?
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  • From thothmoon on April 02, 2008
    "You can't chill the ice master" = THE line XD

    Shura's quest ... I wonder if his role in the story is good or no? Time will tell, yeah? You've given us a taste, not enough to have a solid idea of what all's going on, but it's enticing!

    Oh, and Kurama's occupation--he *would* make a good PI, wouldn't he? ^_^ Nice.
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