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Reviews for What I steal...I keep

By : chilli
  • From writeaddict on December 12, 2010
    That was awesome. Your story was excellent and made me smile, especially your word usage. There were a few grammatical errors but it was good and you kept everyone in character. The baby at the end? Icing on an already fabulous cake.
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  • From kazu07 on December 02, 2010
    wai~ the story flow is great! and I look into your profile to read more your writing..gasp! what I found!! you're the writer of "as we lay" I absolutely love that story. As we lay solidified my interest in kurama x yusuke pairing (with seme kurama) Unfortunately this airing is lacking. you pictured kurama and yusuke maturity beautifully. but still you drew to much parallel between this story 1) the war between kurama and keiko 2) sensuality of kurama and yusuke 3) yusuke insecurities issue. but..but..but I love all this , so I don't mind it been repeated. Hopefully you wrote more lengthy plot kurama x yusuke series
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 12, 2010
    This was an incredible story that needs more reviews because honestly? That was a smoking hot lemon. I haven't read something that different and wicked in a long time. And the plot of adorable and all kinds of Yusuke/Kurama goodness. I really like your writing, it has a unique flow.
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  • From kitkit on September 02, 2010
    lls....who gives there parthner a baby for christmas...that ending was way to funny. im glad that keiko found happpiness.
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  • From ANON - ardentes on August 28, 2010
    I love this chapter! I thought it was good. I hope you write more stories. I enjoy reading your stories over and over again!
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  • From Cinder1013 on August 15, 2010
    I just read all five chapters. Really hot. Your Yusuke is dead on. Loved it.
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  • From kitkit on August 10, 2010
    yum...i was so waiting for that.
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  • From reamane21 on August 09, 2010
    Yes another chapter just to hold me over until the next update. Also i want to know what happen to Puu because in As We Lay and I Care For You he was never brought up.
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  • From ANON - RAGA on July 06, 2010
    Just GREAT!!! I love your stories ("As We Lay" is still one of my favorites, though I'm really liking this one too). I hope to see the 5th chapter as soon as you're done. I absolutely love this pairing XDXDXD Wonderful work! (^-^)
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on June 26, 2010
    I have read this story multiple times and this story still manages to completely capture my attention. I am completely riveted by this story. I am bouncing on the balls of my feet in anticipation of what will happen next. Oh! I noticed that in one of your AN's, you said that you didn't have a beta. Well if you are looking for one, I would be humbled and honored if you would consider me. Not that I actually think you need a beta, but in case you wanted one - I am here, willing and waiting. Anyway, absolutely amazing!! Your story.
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  • From ANON - bloody rose on June 19, 2010
    I really like this fanfic. It has several good points that people tend to not include in fanfics concerning Kurama or Yusuke. 1. Kurama is a crafty, smart, and albeit sometimes devious fox. 2. Kurama is not a fluffly little innocent fox, nor is he helpless or weak. 3. Yusuke is not a damned pansy either. He can be rude, crude, and sometimes mean but has a good heart. I have read too many fanfics where Kurama or Yusuke are completely helpless and vulnerable and it takes an over-heroic looking Hiei or Kuwabara to save either of them. Finfics like that sometimes bore me if they are not set in an alternative universe or something like that. I have to thank you for a fanfic that at least preserves some of their original characteristics. I usually like Hiei Kurama stories because those stories are more often closer to the series when it comes to the characters themselves, but this Yusuke Kurama fanfic is good! I really like it and hope you write more! (P.S. I like it when Kurama is a scheming fox, and you captured that perfectly, so I give you some imaginary cookies for doing that!)
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 14, 2010
    I always love your Kurama/Yusuke lemons, they have this richiness to them. Especially the line about Yusuke coming apart in Kurama's arms. Heh. I wonder what kind of "bonding" Kurama and his little brother used to do...you leave a lot to the imagination with your words. And Shiori is funny and amazing - only she could manipulate Kurama just as he manipulates others.

    Can't wait for more, I'm really enjoying this story!
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on June 06, 2010
    As small as the cursor bar already is, I always wish it was smaller because that would mean that i had more to read. It is kind of hard for me to find a YuYu Hakusho I actually enjoy reading because I am picky, but let me tell you that yours is beyond enjoyable. It is riveting, amazing, phenomenal, brilliant, captivating, and any other word that means way way WAY above average or expectations. Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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  • From ANON - ash on May 12, 2010
    oooo i am sooo excited you updated. i love this story and where it's going. can't wait for more
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  • From reamane21 on April 22, 2010
    Several mindmelting orgasms later, to Yusuke’s irritation by the time Kurama left, he still hadn’t figured out how to say ‘No’.

    can you move that up a couple of space when you have time. only because i didn't know that was part of it.
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