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Reviews for What I steal...I keep

By : chilli
  • From brukleflesche on April 18, 2010
    *screams with joy* A NEW CHAPTER! *dances and claps* I was bowled over when I saw you'd posted the fourth part! I was so worried it might not be continued (despite the "of 7" part in every chapter heading), but now my faith is renewed. I love predatory, possessive Kurama paired with this sorta vulnerable, bewildered Yusuke. Plus, ya know, the sex is HOT. XDXDXD And I believe intracrural is a highly underestimated and underused form of sex in fanfic, so thanks for that! Most writers just go straight for the butt, hahah. I also appreciate the long chapters. I realize that may be a large part of what takes so long between each installment. I can only say the wait was well worth it. Keep up the amazing work, okay? Best regards.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on April 16, 2010
    I'm super excited to see another chapter in your wonderful fic!! There may have been some undignified squealing on my end...but anyway, great chapter. I loved how Yusuke's eyes were finally opened to Kurama's advances in this chapter. Your portrayal of Kurama's human mother is the best I've read, especially how well she knows him. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on April 16, 2010
    OH GOD!!!!!! I almost cried when I didn't see that there was another chapter!! It is soo hard to find good Yusuke/Kurama stories and let me tell you, your's is gooood!!! Can't wait for the next update!!
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  • From Artemick on April 13, 2010
    "You're in my spot." Yay for bratty Hiei, and conciliatory Kurama, and their demonic hideaway.
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  • From Artemick on April 13, 2010
    Exciting title - I really loved the first bit with Yuusuke in his apartment. His thoughts were vintage Urameshi speak, and it was sad without him acting victimized (he was alone, but he planned to drink and made an effort, and the present seemed pretty awesome) so it was touching, but not maudlin. It was fun and I enjoyed his voice (It was, like, an idiot proof plan!)
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  • From ANON - Dragon Lover on April 11, 2010
    Yay update! -grins- Yusuke is in for it with Kurama! I can't wait to read more, please update soon ^_^

    -till then!
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  • From Shadowfox13 on February 28, 2010
    Freakin awesome story :) Will there be more? It'd be interesting to see what goes on with that contract and all :P
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  • From ANON - Ang on February 15, 2010
    I came back to reread your older fic and found this :) am soooo happy. I love it so far. I really really really hope you decide to continue!!! You will won't you???
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  • From ANON - Sancta on January 10, 2010
    I love your work. All of it. And this was great. I can't wait for the next part!
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  • From ANON - steph8503 on January 10, 2010
    So what about the next 4 chapters
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  • From ANON - Tanna on December 19, 2009
    I really want to see Yusuke's reaction when he finds out Kurama intends to "keep" him. Please update!
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  • From InvidiaRed on December 03, 2009
    XD

    love it

    keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Sirael on October 23, 2009
    I like it. I don't dislike it. It doesn't need any more improvements, just more chapters. There. I said it. Exactly like you wanted.
    No, really. It's great. I seldom read YYH stories because there are seldom any new ones. But I'm definitely glad I found this one, it's really great. Thank you and have fun writing.

    S.
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  • From ANON - KawaiiGirl on October 20, 2009
    Wow. I haven't been on aff for about eight or nine months. Imagine my surprise when I logged on to see that you added the third chapter to "What I Steal... I keep"? ^^ As glad as I am that you've updated, I am a bit confused. Though your breaks (for time and setting changes) are obviously, the turn you take is not always so. You tend to jump around a lot. And while your topics generally become... relevant to the fic, it becomes so in a round about way. For example: The talk about the re-introduction of yokai into society was applicable to this chapter, but it might have been a little easier to speak of in the beginning of the story (like when Yusuke had gone to the party and exuded a demonic aura. Who says that that situation couldn't be molded so his demonic ancestry was more obvious/seen or aptly felt by the humans there?) . It seemed as if the world was ignorant (along with the Yukimuras, Yusuke's mother and Kurama's family) of the yokai and their overall existence for the first two chapters. You even referenced Hiei as a "boy" being "caught naked" in Kurama's bedroom by his mother in the last chapter. Why else would you do so unless you'd recently made the decision to integrate demons into society when writing the third chapter? Just make it more cohesive and seem more planned. That's my suggestion.

    I do have a question pertaining to Kurama's step father and his family. Why is it that the father's have American and (in the case of his uncle's name) Christian names - e.g.: Harold and Abraham - and the children have Japanese names while their surnames are Japanese? I know many cultures pick "Americanized" names for idiotic English speakers since most of us can't pronounce anything not in English, but they aren't in a business meeting, nor speaking English. So why the names?

    Other than that and the sudden, yet not-so-unexpected, but still completely random appearance of Choko, great chapter. I look forward to more soon.

    Hope all's well on your side of the computer! *hands you a cookie* JA MATA~!

    ~Animefreak242
    aka
    Kawaii Girl
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on October 18, 2009
    Love it so far. I like how this story isn't fast passed. Every event flows into another. I look forward to reading more!
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