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Reviews for Hiei's Harem: Pt. 6 - Expanding

By : 66Hiei08
  • From Usagili23 on July 20, 2009
    Can't wait to find out what happens to Yusuke and Hiei they're my favorite charaters (sp?) love these stories and how you write them keeps me from getting board. I get board easily with long stories, but you have a talent so keep writting.
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  • From Legilmyth on July 18, 2009
    I just got back from a two week vacation. And what a lovely greeting I get by having a whole bunch of chapters to read. I have to say that what happened to Kurama and Yusuke was an absolutly genious twist that I did so not see coming. Poor Koenma has more things to give him headaches now. Any way good work as always. I look forward to your next part.
    Legilmyth
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 18, 2009
    that was a nice way to go out as far as a title is concerned maybe "Controling" because ther seems to be alot of power struggles at play in here...for example: hiei with his own instincts, kurama and yusuke although it's slightly forced, and and i feel that sarista and her trust of her alpha. but that's just my thought's but your better at this then me. hope you find some thing soon looking foward to the next seris. great job
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 18, 2009
    OMG!!!! they want yusuke to claim kurama is that so they can take the resulting kits.....or just for power. and is staci finaly preggers by hiei and when is keomna going to tell us if hiei is actualy sterile but with all the group preggers he can't be unless it's all some kind of mind trick. great update more please
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  • From POHness1 on July 16, 2009
    you care, Hiei, because despite your preconceived notions, you are a strong, honorable demon, worthy of the love and care that your pack gives you. you care because they have become your family. that is why you care...

    i can't wait to find out what happens to Kurama and Yusuke. i wish there was a way for them to be together. i guess i will have to wait and see. ^_^ please, do continue.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 13, 2009
    sorry i am still here just got rather busy lately.......the last two chapters were great so yusuke and kurama have been caught by who thou slave traders or pimps ;) and staci finaly gave in to hiei.....that's good that she feelz that she can trust him now......i can't wait to see how things will work out with every one and who will save kurama, his pack, and yusuke.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 08, 2009
    great chapter one question though when yusuke lowered his eyes to kurama wasn't he submitting himself? kind of like the cats with hiei right or maybe i am just confused
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  • From spooksies on July 07, 2009
    i disappear for a few days and come back sporting a nose bleed.


    DAMN!! that was some hot action!


    ok need to finish with dinner b-4 it burns!

    laters!

    miko ~_^

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  • From SkyaraSnow on July 07, 2009
    I LIKED chapter 16. Very cute!!! Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 05, 2009
    please tell me that she's not hurt...or she lost the baby......i can't wait to see what happens next....oh and what about yusuke and the others when will they reach hiei.....and the brother's how will they be accepted in the pack....please update agian soon and i hope you had o wonderful 4th of july.
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  • From on July 04, 2009
    chap 14!
    hm wheres the fox! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I TOTALLY CANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! (pwrtty pwetty pwetty please with an icecream sundae on top???) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN USPENCE LONG!
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  • From on July 04, 2009
    CHAP 13!
    i really dont have anything to say about this chapter! sorry! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! ITS SO BLOODY FANTASTIC! great job!
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  • From POHness1 on July 02, 2009
    *sigh*
    for bloody's sake, have faith in hiei! he is your damn alpha!
    and hiei, you better keep sane or i will leap into the story and kick your sorry ass!
    *clears throat*
    i really enjoyed this chapter. plz continue ^_^
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  • From on July 02, 2009
    chap 12!
    poor hiei! he doesn't seem to know whats he's done! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS SO BLOODY AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE AMAZING CHAPTERS! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please with an icecream sundae on top???) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG!
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  • From mls1971 on July 02, 2009
    Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
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