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By : UrbanPhoenix
  • From ANON - Sandy on December 11, 2016

    Hi, I'm pretty sure it was your fanfic i really enjoyed when I first started getting into yyh. I tried searching for for ages...did you happen to finish or continue this fic? I would've loved to know what happened. my email is icekitsune@gmail.com if you want to reply


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  • From ardentes on March 20, 2011
    I like this story. I like that Yusuke is a detective in the ninigen work force. I like this Lin character, but that doesn't explain why she would work for the police. She is human, right? I found the back story on Yusuke kind of weird but it works and you do have to allow for some stretching of canon, but oh well. I find this story extremely intriguing and I like it a lot! I don't like that Yusuke could be beaten up by human thugs if he has all of his powers. If his life, and the lives of those around him, are in danger in a situation like this, couldn't he have used his powers? I am confused as to why the team couldn't find Yusuke. Doesn't Kuwabara know where he lives, or is it that Kuwabara only knows where he works? Couldn't Hiei use the jagan to extract the address from Lin or Yusuke? Doesn't Koenma know where he lives? I also am confused as to who Angel and Jaxxia are, and who are the two people talking in the last chapter about if Yusuke will break or not. I ask you to at least explain who Angel and Jaxxia are in the next chapter, or give us a rough hint. I really did like this story so please don't take what I'm saying as trying to flame you. I just am easily confused and am curious if you have answers for this stuff. I wish you luck with the next chapter and I look forward to reading more soon! I will be looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kyllian on March 18, 2011
    These are the two I could spot easily enough:

    "I remarked and leaned down to put my helmet on.

    Both of us looked turned to see Kurama standing a few feet from our vehicles. Yusuke glanced at Lin."

    If you'd like a beta, i'd be more then willing. Maybe someone to help make the story flow a little better. I've been watching this story for years to see if you'd ever update. I'm pleasantly surprised to say the least. Happy writing.[:

    Just email me and let me know.
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  • From kitkit on January 23, 2011
    LOVE IT....i already see some differences from the orignal, i can't wait to see what other differences are added
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on January 22, 2011
    Yes yes yes yes YES YESYESYESYES!!!! I basically had an organism when I saw that you had updated!! I check every once in a while to see if you had updated and you did!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomp* Anyway.....I absolutely looove your story. The hints into Yusuke's past and the new twists in the future!!! I also loove how Yusuke is now working for humans as a cop. Your story completely fascinates me and I very much hope that you continue it.
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  • From reamane21 on January 19, 2011
    i thought u you forget about this story thank you for the update.
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  • From ANON - cookiestalker on September 26, 2010
    I LOVE THIS!!! I really hope you continue this story!
    I like the way you've portrayed yusuke without all his "usual" friends and him having a "dark secret".
    Looking forward to the next chappie!!!
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on August 01, 2010
    Ooooh the suspense!! How evil of you to keep me wondering about what is going to happen next!! Your story has me addicted!! I really really hope you were planning on continuing. Please please please please pleas update!!! I am begging you!!
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  • From kitkit on July 29, 2010
    love this story..this chapter was differnet than in the other one, i can't wait to see what other changes you have made to this story
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on June 27, 2010
    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was happily surprised to see that there was a new chapter up from when I first read this story. This story is phenomenal. I love the way the story is set up!! Your lure your audience in with enough background history and plot, then BAM!! the real story begins. I am really sad the chapters aren't longer. I saw your were rewriting this story to be in the 3rd person, an was wondering if you were going to finish the story. I would really love to know. There are very few stories I actually get addicted to, but this is one of them. So, I hope to see that you have updated and that you have put your other stories on here because if this story is any indication, then your other stories must be amazing also. Anyway, I am going to go reread this now. Bye-bye.
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  • From yaoihentai69 on April 23, 2010
    yay! An update! I was afraid you abandoned this or something. T.T But from my memory, this is doing a lot better than the first person view. It's much easier to visualize. You're doing a good job. ^.^ Can't wait to read the next installment.
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  • From reamane21 on April 22, 2010
    yeah an update i thought you have forgotten all about the story,glad i check for updates also will this be on FF.net as well or will it stay on AFF.net only.
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  • From RikoneShade on September 02, 2009
    Holy shit, that guy from Yuusuke's past is going to pop up anytime now, I know it! O_O! It's almost like a frickin horror movie! -Hides under a blanket.- oo; Very nice though. =] I like it bunches and can't wait to read more. I escpecially like how you've added some comedy with the angst. -Nods.-
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  • From YojiKato on August 16, 2009
    I really like this story and am terribly intrigued as to where it is going. I never read the original version. Hope to read more soon. ^_^
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  • From Strailo on August 07, 2009
    You know...I had originally thought you had completely died on us but I'm glad you haven't. *hugs* I first read this story on FF.net (I sat down and did it all in an hour or so to) and was really sad to see it not updated. I'm glad that you've picked this up again and can't wait to see more. ^_^
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