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Reviews for AFRAID TO LOVE

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From ANON - Melissa on August 08, 2014
    You are such a good writer. I have read this story several times, and each time, I cannot help but laugh along and even cry along. You are fantastic. I actually read this story on Fanfiction.net first, then I found it again on here. I loved it so much, I didn't even bother to see if there was a difference. Not that it matters. Great story line, even the epilogue at the end was nice. Brava
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  • From ANON - Melissa on December 18, 2012
    OMG I loved your story. I never actually thought that Hiei and Yusuke made a cute couple but you have changed my mind in your final chapter. That is how friends and lovers should be. Never giving up on love no matter what has happened to the couple. Please write another story with Youko and Hiei! You have a talent that I respect. Loved the story, LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT!!!!! Lol sorry I just appreciate a good story.
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  • From Bane_Huntress on February 24, 2012
    IT's amazing what a bit of trolling for old fandoms can do ^_^ 1st YYH story I've read for about 10 years and it's a little epic ^_^ it's nice to see this fandom is still breathing a little, makes me itch to write another FF myself :S so here I am watching the series again and hunting for more ficts ^_^

    Great story!!, loves ever juicy second of it (winced a little at the Epilogue, sorry :S) but I'm a sucker for some H/C of ANY kind.

    Thank you for restarting a beloved fandom for me ^_^
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  • From ANON - Missy B AKA razielslittleflamekaat on June 22, 2011
    I enjoyed this so very much KuramaXHiei is done so much but rarely is it done well enough to be called good. I delight in the pairing and it made me happy in this because it was my favorite and it was sweet and good stuff more then usual
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  • From ANON - Haineko on May 22, 2011
    I just thought I'd write a proper review since I did enjoy reading your story (which is rare for me since I am fairly critical). I liked the concept/plot, the well-written narrative, and the depth you executed in your characterization. The pain your main characters suffered when dealing with the loss of the other felt very real as you were able to pinpoint exactly what sort of gut-wrenching narrative would best convey the sentiments. My favorite part of the story was the characterization of Kurama as a fox sleeping under Hiei's window as he tries to prove to Hiei that he is sorry and serious about love.

    A few minor points I thought I would point out that would make reading a little smoother (I promise no flames, just suggestions):
    1. The direct address comma: This was the most prevalent point. I noticed it was there sometimes, but usually it was MIA. (eg. Corrections for Ch.2: "You did that on purpose, Hiei" or "Relax, Fox." or "No, Mother, I'm sorry she's not.")
    2. Keiko's last name: 'Ukimora' should be >> 'Yukimura'
    3. Inconsistent Romanization: You have Kurama's human name as 'Shuuichi' (with the extra 'u' for the elongated syllable) and 'youki', but not for 'Yusuke' or 'Yoko' (though the 'Yoko' is sometimes written as 'Youko')
    4. Genkai's former fighting partner: (Ch. 4) 'Taguro' >> 'Toguro'
    5. "effected" >> "affected" (Ch. 9, 17)
    6. "Jagon" >> "jagan"? (Ch. 17)　
    7. "Mozuku" >> "Mazoku"? (Epilogue) "mozuku" is this slimy seaweed that looks like green somen noodles.

    Like I said, these are just are just minor things in case you were looking for constructive feedback. The story itself was extremely well-written and I gave it the highest rating. If it was not my place to point these out, please forgive the intrusion. Thank you for putting in the time to put your creative thoughts to paper.
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  • From ANON - Kerbear on February 25, 2011
    Though I'm sure you don't want to for a while,I look forward to your next Hiei/Kurama or Yusuke/Hiei/Kurama
    story. You do so well at the longer sory lines and are great at bringing out all kinds of emotions.
    Well done as always
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  • From yaoigurl06 on February 25, 2011
    Oh my gosh that's so sad and sweet at the same time!!! Very nice!!! I can't wait until your next story!!!
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  • From Kula on February 22, 2011
    The ending was so powerful, you made me cry.
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  • From Angelkitty7888 on February 22, 2011
    Awww!!! that was pretty cute... im glad you had it that way though... i love how you had yusuke and Hiei get together like promised... it finished it perfectly :)

    i hope life smooths out for you dear! i can't wait to read more of your fics! they are among the best YYH fics i have ever read and you are one of my favorite authors!
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  • From ANON - nekosmegitsune on February 21, 2011
    I love all your stories.
    I am glad you plan to continue writing when
    inspiration hits. Whether its long or a one
    shot matters not its just so wonderful to be
    able to read your stories.
    thank you so much.
    May inspiration visit you often
    all my best
    a big fan
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  • From ANON - sexytiger(nette) on February 20, 2011
    loved it from start to finish and i must say i teared up when learning about the deaths of kuwabara and even keiko. but kurama's i knew it was coming but it was still hard to take in and i loved how you brought hiei and yusuke together, no matter what they still have love to share with the other and i think that's beautiful. thank you for sharing this story and hope to see more of your work in the future :D
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  • From 66Hiei08 on February 20, 2011
    What a beautiful ending to this story!! I hung on every chapter, but this one actually brought me to tears. First one in a long time to do that. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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  • From ANON - kerbear on December 27, 2010
    Wow,great ending.Though I love to see more on this story with them exploring each other and Yusuke.
    Taking a break is always good.Hope your holidays are going great for you
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  • From shozurei24 on December 27, 2010
    Aw! That was such a sweet ending. I love it.
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  • From yaoigurl06 on December 27, 2010
    *GASP* how sweet was that!!! you never disappoint with your fics!!!! YOUR A GOD!!! I bow down to your talents *gets on knees and bows* Please tell me your going to write another one!?
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