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Reviews for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 12 - Dominating

By : 66Hiei08
  • From POHness1 on December 14, 2009
    ahhh, so the first of Yusuke's children is born. i wonder what Hiei plans to do with them. and i can just see the baby now, putting up a fight. i wonder what their reaction will be to Hiei when they get more active. that will be interesting.

    also, i wonder how long it will take one of the others to ignore orders and go searching for Hiei again. just because he told them that he doesnt want to be found, doesnt mean that they wont go looking. which brings up another thought - will Yusuke and Kurama be able to sense energy similar to their own coming from that region? can they sense their expectant expectant children? just a thought.

    i understand your position on the River and the other marked younglings. i agree, tho i do find it cute taht she wanted a kiss. hehe. it was one of those 'aaawwwwwww! ^_^' moments.

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on December 11, 2009
    that was so bad a$$ of hiei to step up and take out those a$$e$ i have been reading Captured and have started Aftermath i think i am on chapter 30 Damn they are so frickin Great.....i just can't stop reading.....you have major talent....keep up the great work.
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  • From POHness1 on December 03, 2009
    we all knew that Sylk would cause she trouble, and here she is! man, i tell you what. i hope she calms down a bit and realizes that staying by hiei - even is half-grudgingly - is a good idea. she doesnt have to like it, she just has to do it.

    and why do i feel like the fact that Ooshama like males will come back and haunt us? hiei better watch out. im positive that he can win, but Ooshama might put up a fight.

    and im lovin all of these new kids. lol. hiei needs to come to terms, though, with the fact that he marked his daughter as his MATE. i wonder how long that will take...


    plz continue! ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on December 02, 2009
    HEY SORRY I HAVE BEEN SO BUSY LATELY THAT I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO REVIEW LIKE NORMAL PLEASE FORGIVE ME! LOVE THE CHAPTERS I WONDER HOW HIEI IS GOING TO TAKE OUT THE OTHER ALPHA....AND THANXZ FOR CLEARING UP WHY THE MARE WAS NOT MARKED YET......GREAT JOB AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 29, 2009
    wow i get back reading and find that you not only finished your last installment but that you started a new one......wo so much to read.....i wonder how he will take down this next alpha and how will minoro fell when finds out that his alpha was mounted by someone else.....and hiei won't get preggers right because he has to be in heat for that i think am i right......great job
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  • From POHness1 on November 28, 2009
    niiice. every once in a while, hiei could use some - hehe - domination. though technically, this would be the case of the dominant male still being in control, even in a submssive state. anyway, it was quite lovely. ^_^

    i wonder how simple or not it will be to take down Ooshama. i guess i will have to wait and see.

    plz continue.

    and i hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving. ^_^
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