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Reviews for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 12 - Dominating

By : 66Hiei08
  • From Cherokee on January 05, 2010
    It's bee so long that I had to go find my account. *sighs* Just wanted you to know that the plot evolving into more than a lot of rutting has been a good direction. Mating, drama, drama, drama, peace for a short time, then another mating season. Sounds like Hiei might have some handle on what's going on by the next time all his females go into heat, might. *laughs* Just thought I'd let you know that, yep, I'm still reading and you still can weave a good story, keep them coming!
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  • From POHness1 on January 05, 2010
    that as kind of sad... but, the only reprieve is that she got to see her father again. that much, at least, was achieved.

    river is so cute in her innocence. i can see that she will be fun to watch grow up, though. and i hope that she will be able to keep Staci alive. i dont see much hope in a human carrying a fire demon's baby. i wish her all the best.

    i wonder if, in the next installment, yusuke and kurama are back? and yeah, what of their children? so many questions left unanswered. and so many more interesting things to read.

    plz continue. this is still endlessly amusing ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on January 02, 2010
    well i wonder what steps will bionic woman take....and what will it do to hiei.....great chapters.
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  • From POHness1 on January 02, 2010
    i wonder what kind of effect Mukuro will end up having on Hiei's region. im kinda worried...but not really. ^_^

    and i so enjoy reading about his meetings with all the alpha of the respective packs. he can be so entertaining to watch. lol.

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on December 31, 2009
    what a way to start a new year with a little smex very tasteful smex......i love the three chapters will hiei have to confornt yusuke and the others will they ever learn of thier kids?...excellent job...Happy New Year!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on December 28, 2009
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW, hiei put her a$$ in her place....yay hiei....great chapter
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  • From POHness1 on December 25, 2009
    i didnt like Sylk in the beginning, but Sylk as the Alpha Female i REALLY dont like. she better learn that Hiei's word is law and suck it the h--- up because i just wanna slap that attitude out of her. SHEESH...

    *sigh*

    anyway, i wish Hiei good luck with all of them. he will need it, i can see.
    and by the way, does her being Alpha Female give her power over Troyo and the other bearer males? i hope not. where is Gamaru when you need him. he would have beat the s--- out of her... or at least try. lol. that would be great to watch.

    plz. continue. ^_^
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  • From cahepyp on December 25, 2009
    hehe Merry x-mas, thanx for all the chaps the last few days. ^_^ I think it'd be interesting to see how the whole "your not my daddy" thing works out with Yusuke's and Kurama's kids, especially since Yusuke doesn't even remember being captured. hehe, and our poor little korime got pushed into a lot of crap he tried to avoid, can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on December 25, 2009
    Merry Christmas to you, Merry Christmas to you, Merry Christmas to you, I loved the three chapters, Merry Christmas to you.
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  • From POHness1 on December 23, 2009
    ahhh, and what a lovely pyre it was, i'm sure. the victory roar was definitely deserved. GO HIEI! ^_^
    and Sylk just haaad to run off, didn't she? *sigh* so like her, not to give up without a fight.

    Oh well, once she is takin' care of, hiei has a lot more to deal with, most likely having to do with his energy blanketing the ENTIRE region. i wonder who that brings to his doorstep. hehe. i sense good times ahead.

    plz continue. ^_^

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  • From LadySesshoumaru on December 22, 2009
    that was freakin awesome.....i love hiei's dragon......yeah hiei......great job
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  • From POHness1 on December 20, 2009
    ahh, yes. that was quite lovely. lol. i just love the interaction between Hiei and Minoro. good stuffs. ^_^
    and yes, the deal with River did clear up some things, thank you. That will be an interesting predicament when he gets to it.

    well, i guess the only thing left - for the moment anyway. i remember you saying its not even close to being done - is the battle with Ooshama. hm... i wonder if he will put up a fight. i hope so, but not too much. Hiei better win. he has too much riding on this. then afterward, we will see how he manages the entire region. that will be interesting. ^_^

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From POHness1 on December 17, 2009
    wait... you mean he's almost done with conquering the region? ...i take it that wont be the end of it, though. maintaining that big of a pack would be some work too. hm...interesting. and i hope that Ooshama isnt that big of a deal.

    i enjoyed these chapters. i wonder how the meeting with the two new groups will go.

    plz continue. ^_^
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on December 17, 2009
    is hiei going to break out his dragon of the darkness flame on this A$$ that would be totally cool......great 2 chapters i finished the capurted saga yesterday i loved it and the last scene with all three was so hot.....i am starting on shura's quest and i am lovin it so far you are one talented writer....keep up the great work
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  • From kyokohina on December 16, 2009
    Storie is great please update.
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