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Reviews for I Belong To You

By : RenegadeRaine
  • From BlueUtopiah on June 12, 2010
    Just so you know, I've re-read this for about the 50th time this morning and I love it love it love it. Just....unngggg, the dirty talk, the fact that they're IN CHARACTER and fucking - which makes this about 1000X hotter, the demon changes (which are always there for the taking yet people never write them in), and JAGAN USAGE FTMFW. I can't gush enough about this, I know I haven't been around lately but this needs more attention, so it's on my rec list because it certainly needs to be there forever.

    YOU. ARE. AWESOME.
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  • From mhmartini on March 28, 2010
    Yummy. My favorite part, though, was their mind link. For all the hotness that surrounded it, the link got the most description and was the focal point in the story for me. It really added to the lemony goodness. Smut is good, mindsmut interlaced with it is so much better! All in all, a yummy story! (Yaoi - the breakfast of champions, right?)
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  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on March 23, 2010
    It's a good story! I really liked it. However, it felt like this was just skimming the surface of a deeper story, kind of like a side fic. or a continuation of a previous story. It had my favorite pairing so I can't complain but maybe you should write a prequel to this story talking about the mental link and how they first began to be together. I mean, there was kind of that odd aspect of the jagon being used which I've only read maybe 1 or 2 stories mention it being used during sex, which is a great idea. I just feel that the namesake of this work and the last few lines of the story leave something dangling. It's a good story but again, it implies that before this story, they didn't belong to one another and then I'm thinking, well then why are they having sex, and so on. Anyway, maybe it's just me and my overactive imagination. Good luck with writing though and I do hope you write more soon. If you need any help or ideas, email me, okay!
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