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Reviews for Carbon

By : Mikastarlight
  • From Dementian on October 27, 2014
    K I just wanted to say that I have literally sought this story out several times and directed new readers to it several times because it is just that damn good. Bless.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on June 23, 2012
    Sorry about not reviewing before, I never noticed that no one reviewed. I thought the hits meant you had too many reviews for me to bother. I love your story mainly because its not just sex. Your show growth in the characters and while there isn't a strong plot outside of yusuke, Hiei and kurama's relationship( and dealing with new things) your story is amazing. I love the interactions between the characters and you definitely have a way of showing the true personalities( meaning the characters seem to be right not overly dramatized to make the story darker or anything). Thank you for providing a great story.
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  • From ANON - Serenity Rayne on July 28, 2011
    OMG NOOOOOOO!!! That can't be the end! I absolutely loved the problems you gave Yusuke. They were so realistic and they were things that people go through everyday in some way or another. Absolutely brilliant. Brilliant portrayal of the characters. Loved them! And now I'm depressed that it is completed...this was a read I simply couldn't look away from. I just couldn't wait to see what happened next. I really hope you write a sequel. It would be another awesome read I'm sure!! I mean a wedding for the boys! That could add all sorts of new chaos to things. Especially if somehow his mother or Raizen or even his birth father got involved!

    Anyways, loved the story and really really really hope you go for a sequel!

    Happy Writing!

    Serenity Rayne
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  • From ANON - Enirei on April 17, 2011
    I love the story. I've read it almost half a dozen times by now. There's only one thing that makes me cringe. Sugar and/or milk is being placed in green tea. From my understanding putting extra stuff in tea is a Western thing. I have never gone to Japan, only to China and when there no one every asked if I wanted milk or sugar in my tea. I found a video of someone who had gone to Japan, asked for sugar in the green tea and gotten a interesting response.

    The video: http://www.keepingpaceinjapan.com/2010/10/green-tea-with-sugar.html
    You just need to watch the first 3 odd minutes to get the story.

    I know it's a little thing. I'm nit picky by nature and I'm sorry if I offended you.
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  • From kitkit on March 12, 2011
    nnnooo the story is over...i really enjoyed reading it
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  • From Hemamal on March 12, 2011
    Awww, I wanted Yoko to come out and play!! But other than that I really love this story, and it will certainly be my top favorite for a long while.
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  • From KageKitsune on February 09, 2011
    I really like this so far and I hope you update soon!
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  • From yaoihentai69 on February 09, 2011
    mmm, possessive Yusuke~ shishishi, I'm sure it can get really interesting. XD

    When someone casts Flame on you, just remember you have an auto reflect shield. ^.~ Keep up the great work! I'm always waiting and wanting to read more. :)
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  • From ANON - TKeshesava on February 06, 2011
    I love this story, I love the emotions from all parties and the wonderful collection of emotional and instinctual reactions. I feel as if I am experiencing each characters position from inside of them. Please continue to write, I hate the lulls in updates. I need completion. Love to see more.
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  • From ANON - stena on February 06, 2011
    love your story please keep it up
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  • From ANON - Aleerasuru on February 04, 2011
    Your story is amazing i cant wait for u to update u have a way with words :)

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  • From kitkit on February 04, 2011
    oohh this story keeps gettin better with each chapter
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  • From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on February 04, 2011
    I really like how you're having Yusuke encountering difficulty with his heritage. Makes this a lot more realistic. And wonder of wonders, there's an actual plot! That's not meant in a sarcastic manner BTW. It's so refreshing to see a story on here with an idea behind it. I like how the boys are explaining demon culture. Koenma should make another appearance after Hiei's mating. There would probably be a change in his aura or energy and the Spirit World might be able to sense it. And being the paranoid freaks they are, they'd have to investigate. I think Yusuke should take some time in the Makai, it might make him level out some. A lot of demons in any universe seem to be geared towards 3 things; fighting, food and sex. I believe Yusuke is in a rather severe need of the third part of the triangle.
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  • From HollowedRose on February 03, 2011
    I'm so tired right now since I haven't slept the entire night yet I still couldn't leave before reading your latest chapter, and I want you to know that I am really enjoying your fic, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dragon Lover on February 02, 2011
    I love this story! I litterally look for updates all the time ^_^ I just love how you do all three characters and I am eagerly awaiting more!
    Please update soon!

    -till then!
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