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Reviews for Carbon

By : Mikastarlight
  • From kitkit on November 20, 2010
    love it
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 20, 2010
    DAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW Shiori is so nice. I love how she took Yusuke under her wing. The end of this chapter is all *sniffle*

    And poor Kurama! He needs to just come out and be like: YUSUKE, I WANT YOUR ASS, SO THE NEXT TIME YOU MAKE OUT WITH ME IN THE MORNING I'M TAPPING IT, KAY? Hopefully Hiei will watch and then join in.

    And since when is Hiei the voice of reason? He's the glue in this story, holding everyone's shit together. Nice. Hey, he's a smart guy when he isn't saying HOT.

    NOW WRITE SOME SEX FOR THIS PLEASE. I NEED TO SEE KURAMA HAPPY AND FRESHLY MARKED.
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  • From kitkit on November 12, 2010
    luv it
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  • From ANON - sara on November 07, 2010
    Love this story so much. And I really like the way you've been writing the characters. They all seem natural. can't wait for the next updates.
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  • From kitkit on November 02, 2010
    wow...yaahh hiei got some action...i can't wait to see if next time kurama will get some lovin
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  • From ANON - YACUMO on November 01, 2010
    Nice part with Hiei there. I would have prefered more Yusuke/Kurama action though LOL. Cannot wait until he detective snaps.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on October 30, 2010
    Awwwwww Yusuke's freak out at the end of the chapter was - in a way - cute to me. He flips out and Kurama chases after him and he acts all emo and Kurama comforts him. Romantic. I love how Kurama seems to have this lin-in to him. Oh, and the wake up and make out scene was HOT. More please!

    Now onto Hiei, who is "subtle as a jackhammer" ahjdlahshla HAHAHAHAHA. I love how he's all over Yusuke and being all Hiei. And you can't write anything without the OT3 slipping in there, can you? I understand, those boys are just too sexay.

    You know I'm loving this Mika. LOVING IT.
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  • From writeaddict on October 26, 2010
    Another fabulous chapter, I look forward to more. I was very pleased with the idea of both of them with Yusuke.
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  • From kitkit on October 25, 2010
    wonderful..can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Tanuki on October 25, 2010
    Normally, I don't like fan fiction. Topless Robot: fan fiction Friday has kinda ruined them for me lol. but im realy enjoying your story. you do a wonderful job of keeping everyone in character and the story is believable. and i find myself always checking for a new update. i dnt really review things often so I'm simply going to say Good Job! :)
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  • From ANON - Yacumo on October 25, 2010
    Nice. Very nice.
    Let´s hope to have a little bit of action between the beautiful kitzune and Yusuke LOL.
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  • From yaoihentai69 on October 25, 2010
    Poor Yusuke, always thinking so little of himself. At least Kurama and Hiei are there~ shishi Anyways, I'm really enjoying this story and get excited every time I see you've posted a new chapter. XD The writing is clear and neat, and the story/plot is good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^.^
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on October 25, 2010
    more o.o i want to find out what happens next so more chapters please :D
    oh...and you're doing a fine job...more chapters o.o''''
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  • From Tesgura on October 25, 2010
    Aw, poor Yuuske. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ichigokun on October 23, 2010
    Loving this. Especially now that you added Hiei to the mix.

    Although Yusuke still doesn't get the memo that demons are less heteronormative than humans...ah well..
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