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By : leah
  • From ANON - Parod Vor on April 24, 2005
    This is good, but it could use some polishing and re-formatting...
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  • From ANON - Hiedi Moon on April 27, 2004
    Hiedi: Hey. That was awesome!!!!!!! U really dont suck.
    Makayla: More.....more.....more.....more....more!!!!!!!
    Hiedi: Shut-up Makayla. Who said you could talk and r&r.
    Makayla: sry. :(
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  • From ANON - Hiedi Moon on April 27, 2004
    Hiedi: Hey. That was awesome!!!!!!! U really dont suck.
    Makayla: More.....more.....more.....more....more!!!!!!!
    Hiedi: Shut-up Makayla. Who said you could talk and r&r.
    Makayla: sry. :(
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  • From ANON - Kort on February 23, 2004
    I liked it. Hiei and Kurama are my favorite pairing. All in all, it was a good story. Although it would have been funny if Kurama's mother had walked in.
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  • From ANON - kittiy on January 23, 2004
    that was really good you have to make a seqeal!
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  • From ANON - Angel-Sama on January 08, 2004
    I'm confused.... didn't Hiei come home in the morning? so how could they do their business and go to sleep and it's still morning? They didn't take that long.... did they?
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  • From ANON - katarica on September 19, 2003
    that was fun. ^_^ The description of the lemon started slow and taunting, but suddenly sped up too quickly!
    ^_^ but other than the speed it was fine. very nice, in fact. ;)
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  • From ANON - blackfire on July 25, 2003
    this was great please do write a sequel

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  • From ANON - JesPaiTha on July 17, 2003
    Great story! And good lemon, please please make a sequel! *^^*
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 11, 2003
    Sequel please!

    Save for some minor mispellings, great job!
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  • From ANON - ShadowwDragon on July 10, 2003
    sorry, do you think you could e-mail me when you update? thanx. ~shadoww
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  • From ANON - Shadowwdragon on July 10, 2003
    Hey! This is a really great fic! please keep writing and updating! Your writing style's really comprehensible (compared to most of the other careless writers out there) and your story is VERY intriguing even though it was quite plotless. Ahh, but good lemons are usually plotless, no? Well, I personally don't understand why anyone would tell you never to write again and I would be EXTREMELY grateful if you were to write a sequel. Oh, I suppose I'm blabbering on again, aren't I? hehehe!!! Please update soon!

    ~~ShadowwDragon
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  • From ANON - Shadowwdragon on July 10, 2003
    Hey! This is a really great fic! please keep writing and updating! Your writing style's really comprehensible (compared to most of the other careless writers out there) and your story is VERY intriguing even though it was quite plotless. Ahh, but good lemons are usually plotless, no? Well, I personally don't understand whyoneyone would tell you never to write again and I would be EXTREMELY grateful if you were to write a sequel. Oh, I suppose I'm blabbering on again, aren't I? hehehe!!! Please update soon!

    ~~ShadowwDragon
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