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Reviews for control

By : lildemonicfoofoo
  • From EmbersEye on July 10, 2004
    I really liked the whole concept of dominant and submissive being taken to such a level by these two. And I must congradulate you on your creative positions, lol. I, however, didn't like the 'bringing the reader into play' part of the story. It simply didn't fit well or really make all that much sense.
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  • From ANON - lynn on December 11, 2003
    I really love the way the story works out. Really great story. please write more.
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  • From watchmedrown on November 06, 2003
    I love how detailed it is, but some of the spelling errors and stuff take away from the story, you should get a Beta-reader, or spellchecker. But other than that, this story is SO GOOD. I love how detailed it is, and hey it's about Kurama and Hiei. Keep writing!


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  • From ANON - Mija on September 09, 2003
    ooh this was an awsome fic Im soo glad you finally finished it and it turned out soo well..:-) great fic great work..huggs Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - Katy on September 06, 2003
    Hey, I liked your story so far!! Can you add more to it please!!! It has a great story line!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 03, 2003
    ooh that is sooooo cruel..sniffles..no like cliffy's..sigh and i bet Hiei dont like it er..hr..hehe, cant wait to read your update hope its soon..:-)
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  • From ANON - tatoosh on September 03, 2003
    A wicked tease, nicely done. Pay back can be a bitch ;)
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  • From ANON - Anya on September 01, 2003
    It's good. But I can't belieive you had Hiei asleep the whole chapter - not fair!!!! :(
    Do for forget to continue!!! :>
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  • From ANON - JesPaiTha on August 28, 2003
    *claps* VERY good! I loved it, please continue!
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  • From ANON - JesPaiTha on August 21, 2003
    That was so good! Oh Gods you gotta continue! You got me all horny now. LOL
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 20, 2003
    omg i soooooo luved that chapter..I KNEW IT WOULD BE YOKO...hehe and ve tve the way he got all in a hissy fit and Heie teased him, damn that was just priceless..hehe, OOH I cant wait till you update again, this is a good story..:-)
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