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Reviews for Selfish Desire

By : choukitsune
  • From ANON - katarica on June 16, 2004
    Waa-haaaa! *makes funny sounds* I finally came back to you! I just now got all of my school matters settled so that I've made myself a couple of free hours every day for internet related activities. (took me two months to get everything settled again, damnit) I've almost finished my story, and whilst I wait on people to vote on whether they want a happy or a sad ending, I suddenly had time to come search out and finish reading your story! Very very nice! ^_^ As of 1 am last night I had my final chapter up... as of 9 am this morning I had deleted the chapter and changed everything. I had the obligatory lemon and happy ending, but decided that was no good. While uncertain of a happy or sad ending (I have two possible scenarios in my head, you see) I am pretty certain the audience will not be given a lemon. I don't feel like there should be a lemon there, and like you pointed out, writing a lemon just because others expect it makes for a crappy lemon.
    and what's the point in a lemon if no one can get off to it?
    I loved your story. The number of view points, past thoughts, current lines, and future line branches you just dealt with is amazing and I simply must bow. *bows*
    NOW GET TO WORK ON YOUR NEXT STORY! *cracks whip* You've shown in this that your writing is taking leaps with each peice, and I can't wait to see what you're up to next. ;)
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  • From ANON - JadeTokier on June 10, 2004
    So not only are you a talented writer, you are also a great artist! Just like my mom! Wow! Great Job on everything!
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz. on May 31, 2004
    OMG i was scared i wasnt going to be able to update because this page wouldnt connect and i had to keep refreshing! lols. anyway. i loved the last chapter, the happy forever after but not too fairy tale ish feeling.. its so beautiful! =D and im still loving the line "like the fact that they had really spent very little time 'resting' the previous night as she had ordered. " LOLS.
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  • From ANON - Katy on May 30, 2004
    THat was great! Thanks alot! You rock!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on May 29, 2004
    OOOO, sequel please. That was very good. I am so happy for them all, it all worked out alright.
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on May 25, 2004
    Wow...another wonderful chapter! I'm glad to see Yusuke and Keiko resolve their problems and can't wait to see how Hiei and Kurama handles their's. Keep up the great work and I shall be haunting this site until the next update. ~Kenya
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  • From ANON - shun208 on May 24, 2004
    HEY!!!!! Your really evil!
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  • From ANON - Aenima on May 24, 2004
    GRRRRRRRRRR!!!! You are fucking EVIL!!!!! gRRRRRGggggggggggggggggggRGrGrgRrgrGrGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGgggggggggggggggRggRR
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz. on May 21, 2004
    o0o0olalas. and thats all i can say now cus i have no idea what to say. lols. update soon! =]
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  • From ANON - Aenima on May 09, 2004
    Nice, nice. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on May 08, 2004
    Which story do you want updated? I have the next chapter outlined for my teen titans one, but am finding with my new job that i have NO time right now. However, I am going to attempt to write a bit tonight and tomorrow and maybe get it up there. We will see. Just so busy and right now the kids are screaming. And on to your review. I love this story. Wow, Kurama's mind is a mess. I am really enjoying the different faces of Kurama's personality coming in to view. Can't wait to read more. And I love the made up characters that are with Yukina, very nice.
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  • From ANON - Katy on May 07, 2004
    Awesome!! This story is so good and getting better!! I can't wait to see what Hiei has to go through next. Kep it up!
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  • From ANON - Katy on May 06, 2004
    That was awesome!! I loved it!! You rock!! Oh yeah!! GO starr!! hehe. Time fo rme to get going an dworking on My new story. I hope you update soon! Ta
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz. on May 05, 2004
    ::brushes "sweat" off her face:: whoooo... How could those youkai just attack them liek that?! AH. kept me on the edge of my computer chair. lols. update soon! =]
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on May 05, 2004
    Well, that was worth the wait, short, but worth the wait. I find the idea of Kuwbara being an angel fitting. Of all the guys, Kuwabara is the only one that could actually pull it of. Good Job! I can't wait for the rest.

    Kenya
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