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Reviews for Storms

By : HeartlessKairi
  • From ANON - Foxgirl_500 on July 01, 2005
    You've got some good ideas, but the way you write interfraers with the story. It's very choppy and rushed, and in some places it's hard to tell who's talking. Kepp working, you get better with pratice.
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  • From ANON - The Empress on March 17, 2005
    This story has caught my interest. Please update. Oh yeah, Why were Yusuke and Kurama fighting in the beginning. Were they just playing around? Anyway, I like your story and hope to read more. ^_^ *is waiting for update* XD
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  • From ANON - Altar of Wishes on December 19, 2004
    So you wrote this! I might've reviewed before had I known it was you. I like KuramaXYusuke better than anything else. Like I said before, I can beta... probably because I'm stuck on my own stories and I'm bored. I can fix, add and all the other editing stuff.
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  • From ANON - what2callmyself on September 12, 2004
    Hmmm....interesting....more please!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kyoden on August 28, 2004
    Please continue. This story could be really good. So far its really confusing but that kina makes it interesting. I really want to see what happens next. Update soon! Thanx = )
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2004
    I have no idea what's going on. You should get someone to beta for you, but also can you explain what is going with chapters one and two? They don't make any sense or flow with each other. I would love to see improvements on this story because it sounds interesting.^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2004
    Good story! Do continue! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2004
    It might be interesting, but you need a beta. The syntax is t oft off, though I've seen worse, and it seemed rather rushed. It could use some fleshing out. Also, what in the world is going on? Why were they fighting? Why was a crowd watching? Why did Hie get involved, and why did Kurama seem to want him to? Why was the day so bad just because Yusuke had a lot of homework, which he doesn't usually bother with anyway? Even if it's supposed to be a cliffhanger, it would still be nice to have a bit more insight into their thoughts at the moment so we can at least make some guesses as to what's happening and why. Keep working on it. I'd love to see more Kurama/Yusuke stories.
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