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Reviews for Shadows Unforgiven

By : shun208
  • From ANON - Chibineko69 on January 28, 2006
    This is a good story..but the onyl thing is you use the name's too much. Every sentence has either Kurama or Hiei's name in it....try using some descriptions like "The red-head fell to the floor after the sharp tug by Hiei, and looked up into the smiling dark face." sorry, and I hope you don't take the advice too personally. It is a good story, though!!
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  • From ANON - TGB on December 30, 2004
    Ugh! The sentence structure was really bad. Here's a hint of advice: Try putting some of the sentences together. It might help.
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  • From ANON - Sai on June 17, 2004
    I won't kill you I'LL MASSIQUER (sp) YOU. Nice f.f. tough
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  • From ANON - darkdelta on May 31, 2004
    interesting hum please continued your doing good.
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  • From ANON - Darkdelta on May 30, 2004
    I've read all your stories and there great and this one is awesome you are a talented writter keep up th good work.
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  • From ANON - mz.bitz. on May 26, 2004
    wow. i love the lemony goodness of the fic but i love the fact that theres a plot developing. if its angsty and its going to make me cry all the better. looking forward to that update! =]
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2004
    very good, very good. love the idea. please continue!!
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  • From ANON - animefan4life on May 23, 2004
    i like all your fanfiction here it's so good i read ummm what was it oh yeah it was I Love You i cryed and cryed it was so SAD i LOVED it just like THIS one :)
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