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Reviews for The First Day Together

By : ss_dragon_lady
  • From ANON - Kat1132 on June 29, 2005
    Wow. I really like this story. I'm going to go read the other ones now!!
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  • From ANON - Sil on June 29, 2005
    That was so sad!!And sweet!! I love your stories! At least i know that hiei returns, otherwise i'd probably be cryin'!! Well, now i'm still waiting for you to update The Heights Of Demon Love, please, update that soon!!!
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  • From ryukotsusei on June 29, 2005
    This was a wonderful addition to your arc about the two of them. Very well done.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on June 29, 2005
    Very good story and a great add-on to the others as well.Sorry to see this one end and was wondering if your going to do another side one of Hiei in the demon world/Kurama in the human one?Very nicely done
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  • From ANON - youkaiblood on June 15, 2005
    oh my how kinky!!!! i really like what you did with this chapter.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on June 14, 2005
    Cool chapter!Whats a little rough play, sometimes it makes things more fun.A nice surprise as well because you said only 5 chapters at the haed of this story,hope you have more ideas for it soon. Nice job
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  • From mhmartini on June 14, 2005
    I enjoyed this chapter. Often we forget that these two are demons, as you pointed out, and I think adding some kinky demon lovin' was a great way to not only remind us, but get them to bleed and smile at the same time. After all the fights I've seen, I am relatively sure Kurama is a masochist anyway. Bloody lemons: is that how you end up with pink lemonade? (I know, it would be orange, but that didn't sound right.)

    I look forward to reading more of this saga, whether in this story (I forgot how long you inteded it to be, is it over?) or in Heights. I'm addicted to both.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on May 27, 2005
    Very nice, you knew they couldn't stay mad at each other for very long(I wish most humans acted that way to solve their problems)Dinning out was a nice end to the day yet I thought there would be a little hanky panky at the end of this chapter though.I worked in a baby department for 5 years helping all kinds of couples,it was a very educational but fun time.These two really acted no differant than your normal couple (well done on that) can't wait for the update,hope its soon
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on May 22, 2005
    Oh yeah,solid black would be Hiei all right.But it would be me to, I am not in to all bright colors either.Submissive and covered in chocolate now that could be loads of fun.Can't wait for the next update.......hope its soon
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  • From mhmartini on May 22, 2005
    I really enjoy your stories. This one is very touching; the way the demons are growing closer and the speedbumps they encounter along the way. It's also very well written, and very entertaining. I look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - Kerurie-dono on May 09, 2005
    Ah! I love it! So kawaii! I've read your other two fanfics that go along with this story and i think having this one as like a mini one is a kawaii idea! Love it! lol update soon!!
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  • From ANON - [tililia] on May 09, 2005
    yay, good story~! aww, they're parents... cutey cutey cute cute squishy icky pooty baby~! =] wob babies. babies i wob. but how are they parents exactly? oh, do tell, author, do tell.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2005
    yay! please update soon. i really the way this is going. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2005
    awww... that was very sweet!
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