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Reviews for Old Promises and New Beginnings

By : cillaxox
  • From ANON - dimonyo-anghel on September 21, 2006
    HAhah Keiko set Mako up! That's hilarious! So I'm guessing Minako is going to be with Kurabara at the end of this fic and Mako with Kurama? Poor Hiei, all left out........
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  • From ANON - Princess Koriand'r on July 26, 2006
    You know, it's actually nice to see Kuwabara being the one chased for once, and by two hot ladies too boot. This last chapter was so sweet, especially the part about the mountain - that really made me want to cry. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

    ~Kenya
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  • From ANON - SinkingIntoDarkness on July 26, 2006
    Oh man, what a story to start of my vacation!! ^_^. I look to find you updated! I loved this chapter!! Oh man, the chemistry between Kuwa and Salior Venus is just priceless! ^_^. Can't wait for another update!!
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  • From ANON - Jovianwolfgirl on July 26, 2006
    Oh, man that was great. There were some part that I found myself laughing at but it was really good! I so happy that you update at least. So now what going to happen in the next chapter? I wonder what Kurama going to to do to get Makoto. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - silent pluto on June 07, 2006
    Yum! This story is great! I love it! Please, please, please write more!!
    I gotta know how this plays out! I mean kurama is looking for nookie, makoto and mina having a fluffy type battle. Wish i could flip a coin for a date!
    Truthfully I'm not seeing kurabarwa ending up with either of them. Dude is still hung up on yukina! What a crock!
    Anyhoo keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on December 26, 2005
    Oh man that was excellent! I absoultly loved it!! ^_^. It was such a great date and then when Kurama came hahaha. I loved how he got beat! That was great! He should just leave Kuwa's girl's alone! He can have any girl he wants, and he wants Kuwa's? He desevered to get whacked hahaha. I love this story and can't wait to see the next date ^_~.
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  • From amberlinat on December 25, 2005
    I liked every thing about it, personally, and think your doing great and don't worry so much about what readers think, write for you and until the story you have in your head is complete.

    You do a great job either way!
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  • From amberlinat on December 25, 2005
    Rivals chap- I think your doing great, Lita wouldn't take shit from anyone and she a very determined person so yeah I don't think she'd be shy if she was fighting for the love of her life.

    Mina I also think your doing a great job, she is the goddess of love so your right this whole issue would be deep and serious for her and for anyone who has seen all the SM saga's she's actually a vey serious preson who hides behind a goofy care free persona, so personally I think your doing perfect and like you said when they are alone it will be different. Also love the whole red love string idea! This would certainly be somthing Mina could possible do! Also I like how it's realistic, that strings wouldn't automatically bond based on only 1 person's feeling. GREAT

    Now the Fox, I almost forgot that he's reborn and has two seperate halfs LOL, good job with that, and I do kinda remember that he's suppose to be a heart thorb(well the girls flock to him, but he's usually distant) so yeah I can see him flirting and I can also see how this might help with the end of your story. LOL, can't believe no one has told Ukina(I spelled it wrong again didn't I) that she has a brother or which one of them didn't know? It's been a long time since I watched YYH

    GREAT overall
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  • From amberlinat on December 25, 2005
    okay read through chap 4.........I must say I was suprised i liked this. I have watched and loved both shows(SM is my all time fav anime) and I want to say you did Serena great along with the restLOL

    I first I was concerned that you wouldn't have Mina and Lita address the fact that they were after the same guy, however you were just taking your time and again I can see those two (out of the others) being reasonable about it.

    it will be interesting if Ukina(heie's sister) and i think i just spelled both those names wrong LOL anyway if she shows up later on.

    Again I have always avoided YYH/SM cross over for personally I don't see how they fit, but you are doing a good job of taking the characters and using just mostly them instead of the whole detector/scout angle

    either way it's a good story so far, and I am glad I took a chance on reading it.
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  • From amberlinat on December 25, 2005
    actually I think the proposal was cute, their kids I can see t happening LOL was wondering which two you would pick. WOW when I write SM I always think of Lita and Mina being best friends so your pairing it great to me it will be a wonderful to see the two best friends .....try to win this guy LOL

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  • From YaoiGoddess on October 24, 2005
    Lovely chaps again, as always! And now I should really go do my homework..>>;
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on October 20, 2005
    Psst... your title has three "n"s in it.
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  • From ANON - KuwaLove on October 20, 2005
    I loved that chapter! ^_^ It was awesome ^_^. Excellent chapter! I can't wait until the individual dates come ^_^. I just love this story! Update soon, as well as your other story ^_^.
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  • From ANON - The Green Knight on October 19, 2005
    Minako = Aeris
    Makoto = Tifa
    Kuwa = Cloud


    I'm sorry, but that's what I got out of all of this after reading it again! I started laughing and stuff because of that and because the story's funny anyway. I think that it's very cute! Kuwabara has his hands full with those girls (I personally like Minako)! They should Kuwa's dad, but he's not seen much in the Manga and not at all in the Anime!

    Guess what? I'm listening to "Crush" ('twas American at first) in Chinese and it accents this story very well!
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  • From Katzz on October 05, 2005
    Okay, in the mortal world they can't marry two people. But that's a human law. How about the Spirit world? Teh Sailor scouts are celestial beings right? And Kuwabara is a Spirit Dectective.
    Is it possible for the girls to share Kuwabara? I like both of them with him.
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