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Reviews for The Vacation (yeah right)

By : Evey
  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2005
    I think this sucks. It is not a fic.. its dialogue... I suck at writing yet I write better then this
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 29, 2005
    *Grins* I am very happy...but will those two (Kuwa and Toguro) meet up again?
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  • From ANON - bob on July 29, 2005
    ooh your friend died i'm so sorry to hear that but the good news is I love your fic and I can't figure out why I didn't read it sooner! Please continue, update soon. I want to know what happens to Hiei!!
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 16, 2005
    Oooh...this is getting good! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 14, 2005
    Elder is a demon...basically immortal because of his ability to move his organs around and shape-shift. Yay, you updated! I'm so happy that you did! Please don't give up on this!
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 08, 2005
    I would be willing to help you...if you want. I don't really want to see you give your stories up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2005
    update!
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on July 05, 2005
    this could be a good story if you'd stop with the banter and silly remarks between what goes on.It shows you have no idea how to set a mood unless you just want to set a bad one(hope not)
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 05, 2005
    You know, I am an author myself and am guilty of leaving my readers evil cliffies...now I see what they go through and man, it is NOT pretty! Please...more...soon?
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 05, 2005
    I guess it's okay if it's nonconsentual but I still think Ani having Kuwabara enjoy it would be more tormentive. I mean how ill do you think Kuwabara would be if he was to whimper and beg the elder toguro to touch him? You are doing well so far though I would consider getting a beta...someone to read and critique your works for spelling, grammar, ect.
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 05, 2005
    Noooo...you can't leave it there! You are so mean to me! *Sighs* I am definitely getting a complex! I promise no more annoyed reviews just don't leave it like this again!
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  • From ANON - Natalya on July 04, 2005
    Stop leaving the damn cliffies! I am going to get a complex if you keep this up! I love this story and I want you to continue but the cliff hangers are killing me! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - kitsunechibiko on June 30, 2005
    they r waaaaaaaaaay out of character, and u know that, but it makes it a hell of a lot funnier. if my mom wasn't here i'd be laughing.
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  • From ANON - Natalya on June 30, 2005
    *Smiles* No, you're right, I am a girl. If I have to review a thousand times over to keep you writing this, I will!
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  • From ANON - blissfully unknown on June 19, 2005
    yusuke will get kidnapped! that way, hiei and kurama can fight over who gets to go save him! great story by the way!!! ~_^
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